Excellent story.
Most enjoyable.
Well written.

A very sweet story.  As do the others, I would very much to find out how Jane's shopping trip turned out.  Another chapter, please?

So sorry it took me such a long time to find your story. Truly pleased with the style of your writing. Surprised that you appear to have abandoned the possibility of a sequel since it was drafted two whole years ago.  Can I urge you on...at this late date. Loving thoughts.
Jeannie

Dear,

At last count there were 12 commentators. All of them agree this is a lovely story. All of them agree they cannot wait for the next chapter. I am so very pleased to join with the others and wish you well.

Cassandra

Truly a lovely, lovely story! Please don't make us wait too long for the sequel! Love & Kisses  Carolyn Renee

I totally loved your story, and I hope that soon you'll add at least 100 more sexy chapters :)  Thanks again for making us all so... happy! Drop me a line if you'd ever like to have help with it or new ideas.

Hugs 'n kisses,
Marci

great story! one which i think all crossdressers wish could have happened, at least as far as acceptance from both parents and to find out the father is a dresser too was exciting not to mention scary at same time.  i hope to see the next part soon.

hugs julie larue

Dear Elizabeth Ann:

  A story filled with: joy, acceptance, fulfillment of dreams, and an amazingly supportive and understanding family. How could that not be a lot of fun? I enjoyed this story immensely and hope you continue it soon. For once both Dad and Mom are involved in a sweet and sentimental process. Where does it all lead? Please don't make us wait to long to find out.

    Even for a sweet and sentimental story, which are usually my preference, this story is a winner. Well written and no slouch in moving quickly and cleanly to what we as readers are waiting for. Great job.

Hugs,

Kristi

   

I loved this story.  Sweet, a wonderful fantasy.

very nice story. Looking forward to the next part.
The Best, Lori

I loved the story and well written.  My only little cticism is it's just a bit too nice - I like a bit more tension.  Maybe that will come on the trip to the mall.  I am looking forward to reading more.
Good luck and hugs, Annabel

My, what a wonderful story!  You so wonderfully described the feelings of a young crossdresser as he discovers the girl inside him.  And who better to guide him than his own crossdressing father?  Delightful, entertaining, and enjoyable.  I look forward to future installments.

Yes i'm enjoying the story. More please!
Hugs, Fran

Who cares about reality!  What a wonderful fantasy!!  I'm really looking forward to part 2.

 I enjoyed this story.A traditional storyline,but well written.I felt the moment of realisation that the clothes Jane was using were her father's ,rather than belonging to mum ,was a great touch.I enjoyed this and look forward to more.Thank you.

   Love and hugs

    Elsa_b

A very nice beginning to what appears to be a nice story of a teenager coming of age.