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Like Father, Like Son... Like Mother, Like Daughter
by Emma Kate

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Comment by Karen on 04/27/08
Hi Emma,

Nice story, well written. I enjoyed it very much.

Love Karen.


Comment by Kristi Fitzpatrick on 02/03/08
Nice Story that could use some more polish but was enjoyable all the same. A little too effusive and excitable too much of the time, but then this is a big reunion. Still needs to have some normal interactions for most of us readers to relate to. Some more action sequences would have been fun, such as a makeover, dress shopping or whatever. Show characters through doing, not so much telling. Thank you for sharing. I did like it.

Hugs, Kristi


Comment by Anonymous on 07/05/07
A great story and well written.

Comment by (AJ) Eric on 06/21/07
Nice story that could easily have been given the "sweet/sentimental" tag. Solid writing and emotions that felt real: a little slow-moving, perhaps, but certainly not enough so to be annoying.

I find myself once again disagreeing with fans who want a sequel. The plot of another story would require some conflict that these pleasant folks would have to overcome. Our two heroines have gone through enough -- please leave them in the happy-ever-after condition we find them here.

Eric


Comment by harry reimers on 06/20/07
can there be a Like Father, Like Son... Like Mother, Like Daughter 2
how thay got on did thay get kids

Comment by Joni W on 06/19/07
Emma, very well done dear.

It is nice to see a father and son, now mother and daughter find the love they both had for each other finally grow. The other part I liked was the former spouse becoming a part of that love. In real life, this seldom happens. Maybe this is a fantasy but it would be nice if real life could be this way.

Good Job! You think there could be a follow up sequel to this some time? That too could be a good story.




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