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Linda's Run
by Linda Nylons

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Comment by jake jilennanal on 05/16/17
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Comment by Linda Nylons on 12/24/16
Forget the last email address it's

lindanylons@yahoo.co.uk


Comment by linda nylons on 07/24/12
my email address is linda111@live.co.uk

XXX Linda


Comment by Paula on 08/28/05
As a crossdresser my self I felt so in touch with this story. I can only hope that you continue with this. I will be watching hard for the next chapter. You might also include the dog having more fun.

Paula

Comment by Pippa HighHeels on 01/02/05
I enjoyed this story and once I'd started, had to finish it; the story made me hard and produce pre-cum...

As a fantasy it was particularly kinky and shocking, which made it all the more exciting. I would have liked a little more detail on the feelings involved; certainly to reach such intensity at a first meeting is incredible - it could hve been spun out to several meetings, each getting heavier and heavier.

The introduction of the dog was very unexpected and particularly kinky, but I enjoyed it all the more for it, even though it's an aspect of sexuality I'm not especially keen on, but certainly wanted to find out more after the story.

The use of family references to the relationships makes it also incestuously kinky, which is another twist.

I should encourage Linda Nylons to write more and become more extreme in her writing.

Comment by juliej on 08/24/04
the fantasy is vey good espicailly with all of the girls theire the ending commment about it being the end i think not and i feel that he is going to end up as a girl with or without his consent the story is leading that way &is brilliant more please asap great writing



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