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Lingerie Fashion Show
by Joan Stevens

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Comment by me suba on 12/21/18
UiD0JC There as certainly a lot to learn about this issue. I love all the points you ave made.

Comment by Brianna Johnson on 11/21/10
amazing story, dose anyone else have a stroy like this with photos. Whis it was longer. But an amazing story. If anyone has a story like this email it to me or link at theonebrian1985@yahoo.com

Comment by lee lee on 11/30/07
Hon I love this kind of story  there is enough reality to it to make it believable and for those of us who started our female fantasies at an early age it showed us  what we could have had  with the right Mistress..I found my Mistress when I was fifty and she did all she could to make up for lost time  but it could not match the lingerei model   thanks for a wonderful story

Comment by Simon on 05/06/07
Joan
An interesting short story, I see quite a few misplaced or misused verbs, particularly the use of "Domintated" instead of "Mastered"
I would love to be able to help you with your English if I could.



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