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The Link
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Early June on 07/19/04
Another fine variation on a TG theme by this talented author.  And Jennifer makes it seem so easy. I like to see "justice" prevail. She plays her stories as a concert meister does his Strad.

Comment by Wholeman on 07/16/04
Haven't read a Jennifer White story in quite some time...  Since she refuses to fairly rate her stories as far as whether the story should be X-Rated or M-Rated.

No matter how much I like her stories, until I see a R-Rated or M-Rated story, I will not read them.

Sigh...

Holly

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 07/15/04
<<    But as for you Abby, you will be nothing but a love slave to John, living only to serve him. Even if he tries to push you away, your only need, your only desire, is to serve him. You are so deep in love that he is all that matters to you. You and your womanly needs."  >>

So even if John, like I imagine most males, does not want a shemale love slave, he's out of luck as she's been directed to be his love slave even if "he tries to push her away" ??  He can't even use her for anything else, as she is directed to be not just his slave but specifically his love slave, ruled by her 'womanly needs".  I can see her stalking him so that she can beg him to take her; how embarrassed will he be as, at the mall. she suddenly appears, drops to her knees and, while trying to unzip his pants, crys out, "Fuck me, master!  Please fuck me!"  he will have to go to all the trouble of restraining orders, etc. to keep her away.  It's nice to see the bast ... oops, bitch ... getting what h/she deserves, but  the way the punishment is phrased, it's not a very nice thing for The Senator to do to John.

Comment by DianeH on 07/15/04
Wonderful!  Truly a breath of fresh air in writing.  My only complaint?  It was too short!  Keep writing and sharing please.
Diane

Comment by paula on 07/15/04
nice story plenty of twists



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