I LIKE THIS STORY LINE KEEP IT GOING..HOW ABOUT SOME FEMALE CONVERTS WITH THEIR HANDY MALE PARTS..AND MALE MEMS TO DEAL WITH...YOU ARE DOING FINE -CONTINUE..  

Great story ...... i was reading and i got so hot i had to stop and put on my panty ,stocking with my 5 inch high heels to finish reading ... i wish something like this could happen to me :) keep to story cuming

Disgusting and sickly.

Great story can't wait for more Having the wish to transform myself I found it very satisfying

Great story! I especially like the idea of world domination - a touch of the James Bond movie here. Hope to read more in the future.

Loved It! The sex wasn't bad either. Really liked the plan for domination of the male. They haven't been doing a great job. I read some of the other reader comments, the one about the man to little girl, not a bad idea. There are certain men I would love to see in Nicloes position. You have a winner here Sweetheart.
Love Ally!!!

Hi, Great story as I have a fetish about lipstick and what can be done with it.  Keep the story going.

I loved the story.Please write more as i would love to find out what her big plan is.

The story was fantastic, I just wish that it was me being transformed into a women. thank you, and please keep the story going.

great story i wonder where the the story will go and who they will capture next?keep the good work. i'll be waiting........

I liked the story Rachael. I would like to hear what happened toNatasha and Mistress Melanie's plan to 'capture' more mere males. What might they use them for? Could they start some kind of service for rich ladies or even for Middle East rich guys?
Write some more Thanks, Ingrid

I liked the story from the very beginning because that's the way the girls in the girlie joints operate and it brought back many memories.  Further, some of them were doing lap dances even before somebody hung a name on it - I guess they can charge more if they called it lap dancing.  I never went home with a dancer but I did with another of the girls - I never felt more nervous in all my life.  But I still like the storyline.   Luv   Rachel Rae     My nom de plume is just plain Rachel but they said it might be well that I add something to avoid confusion.  I'm not confused, are you?

This is great, the lipstick thing doesn't fit the story, but overall it is a fantastic story. Could you write something where a guy in his teens gets transformed into a little girl that grows up and becomes a hottie but always remembers her male life?