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Lisa's Contract
by 2Sheds

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Comment by Chrissy on 03/25/20
Poor Lisa - can you imagine if this really happened to him/her ?
I mean - the embarrasment would hurt

Comment by me suba on 12/20/18
aK41nQ This website was how do you say it? Relevant!! Finally I ave found something which helped me. Appreciate it!

Comment by Kristina on 12/21/07
Great story....please continue it!!!  

Comment by moccrazy on 12/04/07
Great story cant wait for more

Comment by Bridget on 11/24/07
Is anyone else going completely insane?  I NEED to read more and i need it now!!!  One of the best stories i have ever read (and i have read a lot!)

Comment by 2Sheds on 11/23/07
Thanks for all the lovely positive comments so far... it really does give me the motivation to do more!
Happy to hear any more thoughts/requests/ideas etc.

Comment by Suzie Bradwell on 11/22/07
Wow, you actually can feel what lisa's going through, can't wait for more installments to see what her further adventures will be

Comment by Sally-Anne on 11/21/07
Brilliant I loved this first episode. I am looking forward to the next instalment!  

Comment by Pam on 11/18/07
Dearest 2Sheds,

This was fantastic and fabulous too!!  Please, more and more and more...and terribly soon as well!!!

XOXO Pam


Comment by lindsay on 11/18/07
I need more!  I would gladly pay whatever Lisa had to pay (and more) in order for this to happen to me!!!!!

Comment by Lisa Wange on 11/17/07
OOwee I like this.
Sex in a corset and high heels.
Please write the next episode soon

Love Lisa


Comment by Zoe on 11/17/07
Really enjoying this story and very much looking forward to future installments.  It is a very sexy fantasy and well written.  I hope Lisa is trapped as a tv whore and perhaps even gets exposed as such to her friends and relatives.

Comment by Ashlee on 11/17/07
Very interesting story...a bit reminiscent of the "Saw" movie series, but with humiliation the lever rather than pain.  I'm enjoying it.

Comment by Katie Taylor on 11/17/07
Great story and i really love Lisa.  Please write some more soon.

Comment by Hayls on 11/16/07
Great story hun! Can't wait for the next part, just the right amount of suspense, and the ability to relate to the character is high! :)

Comment by Britney Carey on 11/15/07
I absolutely love this story so far!  Please write more soon, as I cannot wait to find out what is in store for Lisa next.  Sooooooooo hot!



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