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An absolutely delightful story, beautifully written with not a flaw in sight.  I lived as Lisa throughout.  Susan should win the Booker prize for this!

This story is rich in detail. It is easy to see why the character's development follows a natural progression.

She-males should have been in the story description. A reader should not have to complete 3 of the 4 parts before finding out!!!

   What a wonderfully written story, it had me totally hooked right to the end,
the grammar and spelling and plot was perfect, I was totally thrown when it was
reviled that Harriet and Jenny were sister and brother, you had me in "susspenders"
(pardon the pun),  I had assumed they were lesbian lovers and were planning to coax Lisa into being a sexual playmate.
  Please give us more stories like this one.
  Kind regards, Pixie. xxx

A lovely story. Thank you

Simply lovely!

A beautiful dream and a beautiful story.I loved it.

Such a pleasure to read a beautiful romantic story. I know that happy endings are generally not fashionable anymore, but clearly the world can only benefit from such positive imaginings.

HI, loved your story, I just wished more storys had pretty feminine aprons in them. Pretty aprons are such a feminine item for that special feminine feeling we all love to feel, just a thought, thank you. CINDY

I enjoyed reading about Lisa, Jennifer and Harriet. The author has an excellent eye for detail. I suspect readers interested in a full, gradual transformation will find Lisa's Dream to their liking. The plot is well developed and there's an element of surprise. Will Lisa's Dream come true?

Thank you for an enjoyable tale...  those that wish the transformation would find them should take heart in a tale like this and not a hard-fisted way that most do...

A most welcome view from your minds eye *applause*  

Dear Susan,
What a gorgeous story! Just my dream come true!! Please make jennifer a male, please don't wait too long for the next instalment.

Bravo, magnificent!  Please do not let us wait too long. Please let Jenny be a boy as Lisa is.  I think it will make the story even better.
Personal assistant...that means a lot in Lisa's case and especially for Ms Armitage. Always read the contents of a contract before signing them.
What ever it is I am sure that Lisa will not mind.

Great so far! I wonder what the contracts Lisa signed actually stated. Also what dates will eventually be used on them. I look forward to more.

an excellent start to a good story i hope it was only a start as i would like to read more of this story

DEAR SUSAN GOOD STORY I HOPE YOU FINING IT.THAT IS IS MY FEMAN NAME
WHEN I DRESS.




                                      LOVE AND KISS
                                   LISAKAYE
                             

It is to be hoped that Ms. Heywood's subsequent literary endeavours will equal her maiden effort, "Lisa's Dream." There are many things to praise in this story, not least of which being that the narrative is extremely well written; Ms. Heywood exhibits a sure feel for language. The author provides a virtual prologue to her story, allowing the reader an introduction to Robert/Lisa which serves as a firm foundation upon which to construct the narrative. Some time is usefully spent on character development (especially of Robert/Lisa) and Ms. Heywood provides detailed descriptions of her character's physical appearance and dress (too often overlooked), greatly assisting the reader in forming an image. Ms. Armitage (hopefully, she will ultimately receive a first name) is clearly the most interesting character of this first part; intelligent and forceful, exuding authority, Ms. Heywood makes her appropriately mysterious, with an air of potential lethalness about her that is only hinted  at with the first parts closure. Part two is eagerly anticipated.

Lovely start to an exciting storyline. Please continue with Lisa's adventures!  Love & Kisses  Carolyn Renee

Well written and intriguing. I look forward to your next installment and the adventures that Lisa will be having.  Please do continue the story as too many start a series and never continue.
Thank you,
Jill