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Lisa's Friday Night Slumber Party
by Victoria Vyce

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Comment by dany on 07/11/10
part 2? more transformation

Comment by Ol' Spud on 07/16/09
Hilarious fun.

Comment by julie j on 11/18/04
a nice story i hope that the auther got permission to use the simpsons name unless its their name as well its a bit short but a pleasent story well written

Comment by Kitty on 06/25/03
A nice story. The characters were true to form at the start but bart's transformation just seemed rushed and wrong for his character. if you were using characters that wernt already established through television or other media then it would have worked fine.. but most people know these characters inside and out and would object to the way bart's character seemed to instantly change.

Comment by heather on 06/21/03
would like to learn more about barts transformation and maybe a part 2

Comment by Jimmy on 06/21/03
A good light-hearted story.

Comment by annoymous on 06/21/03
great story i hope you keep it going.  Would of been nice to have seen more emphasis on barts change.  But nevertheless a great job.



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