When, oh when are we going to get the rest of the alphabet?

Such a talented and imaginative writer going quiet is such a shame.

A fellow Brummie

Paula

Exciting beginning and build-up.  Caught the fear mixed with exhiliration of a first trip out in public.

What a delightful tale.  You have done such a talented job with this series.  I doff my hat to you as I bow profoundly.  Your characterization of Luke was so real, and so on target, including the angst.  The anticlimax was a fitting conclusion to this farcical adventure.  I will be eagerly awaiting "M".

I am with the other gurls in that I do not like incest.  But, you are a wonderful writer with a great imagination.

It turned this sissy on quite a bit.

Normally, incest turns me off, but as a previous reviewer has stated, your creativity is awesome.  This story is quite a romp.  Although it stretches the imagination, it is well written, and as pure fantasy, it is fun to read.

There was no mention of "Lucy" cleaning herself out, so wouldn't Dad - or mom -  find definite physical evidence, including smell, to indicate that whatever the experience, it was NOT a dream?  This is by far the most bizare twist on incest I've read; I should be thouroughly disgusted, but the creativity was awesome!  Good job.

It was great Bethany.  I really enjoyed it.  It was an ultimate fantasy and I enjoyed the cigarette too.
-sv