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by Janet L. Stickney

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Comment by chocopie on 12/21/18
mhAkZM This site is the greatest. You have a new fan! I can at wait for the next update, bookmarked!

Comment by anon on 12/18/13
The kid was being an asshat!

Comment by Mariah on 05/15/13
Another winner Janet, but I am lost to understand the blackmail part that Samantha pulled off.  Just what was she doing?

Comment by STANLEY MORTON on 08/02/07
THE LIST DESTROYS THE FAMILY FORCING KELLY INTO WOMANHOOD. THE GRANDPARENTS DO NOT TRY TO FIX THE LIST UNTIL KELLY BOY IS KELLY GIRL. JANET, I HATE THE VERY IDEA OF THAT LIST. BUT THIS STORY STAND ON ITS OWN I CRIED FOR KELLY. WILL SHE HAVE THE OP?

Comment by Rone Welles on 10/26/06

   Well done this held my interest all the way through ..Janet you captured the essance of the soul in this story.. the soil crying out for release and peace ...  kelly finding that peace was wonderful..

thank you  ...Rone


Comment by Diane Sutton on 12/07/01
Oh girl, how Janet can write. I find the story so much to my liking that I almost wish I was Kelly. Yea, that would be great if I could take her place. Here Janet takes a somewhat lonely boy who has a problem meeting friends and, being one of a group of children who always seem to be left out and, helps him find his way by dressing as a pretty girl and allowing Kelly to now be accepted as that girl.

The way that the story unfolds keeps the reader extremely interested in the changes that accure to Kelly. As Kelly finds that she is now more popular than ever and, that she is no longer that wall flower who was constantly standing by herself her outlook on life is drasticly changed for the better. She eventually finds happiness in life and that is something we all should strive for.

With the addition to the plot line of the father who was unjustly listed on a sex offender list and the way they plan to get his name off that list it gives a somewhat different character to the whole story. It's not just about Kelly but, it's about a family who has for years had to live with a dark shadow that has been forstered upon the family.

And to also have had a sister who was somewhat different that what she had be perceived make it all the more interesting when the truth finally comes out.

Oh, there are many stories similar to this but, not with so many twists within it.

To tell the truth Janet has a way of telling a story that makes reading it so very enjoyable that you are made to feel that it's perfectly normal for this to happen.

Kelly's final acceptance by the school and others is what fairy tales are made of and this is one that could make it to the very top of the mountain. It's like the cream of the crop.

What's best for me is that Janet is so very prolific with her writing that she has so many stories to help satisfy my needs as to reading great tales about feminised boys and such.

If she never stops that will be just fine with me. Janet your the best. If I should never have another author to read then so be it. I can readily survive on your stories.

Comment by Alyssa Davis on 10/02/01
Another good one, Janet.

Comment by "Princess Pervette" on 10/02/01
Another winner.  I love stories about boys who just happen to
get into frillies, but the truly memorable ones are "problem
stories" like this, where there is some deep & serious trouble
that has to be addressed.  You did one like this once before, &
it was great; now you've done it again.  Making the boy's dressing
a believable solution to the family's problems was tricky, but
you managed it very well.

None of this is intended as a criticism of your lighter vein,
but this story is a keeper.

Pervy



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