Brian must have enjoyed being a woman. If he was a man he would have left her in the toilet after knocking the bitch out.

as per my previous comments

a great story i was very suprised that it worked on him he should have realised what going on but didnot untill to late it also surprised me that he would want to do it again well written story more please

I agree with everyone else that this was a wonderful, well-written story.  My only quibble would be that it is a little unbelievable that the first time Brian/Brenda is fully dressed she succesfully passes herself off as women on a date with a man.

My personal taste also would have preferred more detail in the love-making between husband and wife, but I guess you have to go with what you are comfortable.

That being said, I really enjoy your writing and encourage you to keep up the good work.

SS

Hi Jennifer!

I always look forward to reading your stories. They are always well written and so darling. The story line is well laid out and the reader has the opportunity to travel with you as the story unfolds. "Listen Up" is no exception.

I loved this story! I would add my voice to the chorus of others asking you to consider venturing into the Land of the Three Part Story. I think you are ready for it.

Consider this, if you will: Brenda says"...I enjoyed myself tonight. I would like to do it again." Isn't this a hint of what could come? Could Brenda really transition? I think the possibilities are delicious.

Thanks for a truly wonderful story.

Many hugs, dear.

Cassandra

Hi Jennifer!

I always look forward to your nexr story. They are all so charming and well written. "Listen Up", is no exception. It is darling and so sweet. As other commentators have written,  I also would ask you to consider venturing out into the land of the Three Part Story.

Did you hear what Brenda said? "...I enjoyed myself tonight. I would like to do it again.

Many hugs to you dear,

Cassandra

Lots of fun.  It made me giggle a lot.  It flowed quite nicely.  Jennifer, the one-offs have been marvelous, but I'd also love to see you try your pen at a three-parter now so you have time to develop you characters more fully and take your time a bit setting up your rather ingenious plot twists for even more memorable impact.  Just a thought, sister Jen, but no worries, I'll read your stories in any form -- just as frequently as you can post em.

Hugs,
Sheryl S.

How does it feel to be one of the finest writers on this site?  You jump around your categories but the level of consistency and excellence never falters. I love everything about this story, and as a guy who tries to NOT be chauvinistic, I can see where others could use such training.  Personally, I'd love the clothes, but this whole story just got better as time went on.  Femdom for better understanding?  Great idea. From one terrific writer! Thank you.

What a wonderful story, I wish my wife would have done this with me years ago, I tried to talk her into it but she said I was a man not a woman and refused. Now I have to go out of town on business to enjoy my time as Diane. I wish she would have got the hint, maybe I would have been more sensitive to her through out the years. Thanks for the fine fine story. Diane