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The Little Princess in the Pea Pod
by Maggie O'Malley

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Comment by JadeAce on 02/06/04
Maggie O, you continue to publish evocative stories.  I really like the rebirth.  I would like to see your excellent talent applied to the little girl working her way thorough college or in college and experiencing some event.  

Comment by Angel O'Hare on 02/02/04
Hello little sister!

Wow, another fine story and remind me to send you a new box of crayons ok? I just saw a great big jumbo box of Crayola crayons and when I saw them I thought of you! :)

Maggie the cub is still in deap slumber in her mommy's den. Which I am happy to tell you is in the hill in my back yard.

I love your story Kitten and if there is one thing I will have to learn from you is little kids speak! You are the best there is dear!

Huggles
your big sister
Angel

Comment by Tina Michelle Smith on 02/02/04
Thanks for another great story, little kitten.  I enjoyed it so much I could just burst!

Huggles!

Tina

Comment by Saintly on 02/01/04
I loves it sister!! ::hugs::
Yous made a really good story here, an interesting twist on a previous setting.
Keeps up da good work!!

Comment by Uncle Rich on 01/31/04
    Well done Kitten.  You did that very well.  
As Prue said you managed to involve her emotions, well kiddo, you got me again too.
    Keep up the good work. I really enjoy your feel good kitten charm that pervades each and every tale.  
All my love.  Huggles Uncle Rich.

Comment by Prudence Walker on 01/31/04
You little sneak, YOU! springing this story on me, lol what a pleasant surprise. Once again you prove your ability to write a story that gets me emotionally involved. Thanks too, to Holly, for providing the Pea Pod universe so Maggie could play in and realise her dream of becoming the little girl we know and love in the chatroom. Well done honey, surprise me again (winks) huggles from your auntie Prue



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