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Little Witch
by Ann O'Nonymous

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Comment by Stephen on 07/09/11

 I am Pagan also, I loved this  story , even as a male I like to refer to myself as a witch . I have  much to learn and I am off to a slow  start ...but this  story and doll story ,really was fun to imagine such things possible ......thank you  for all your wonderful stories.

          Blessed Be.
             Stephen


Comment by k mixon on 05/22/08
Hi;
  I like the story. It has a nice flow to it with detail,not over
done. Send the little witch my way.

Comment by julie j on 03/14/05
this is a sweet story someone rewarded with kindness & three bullies made to regret there actions in a preminant way  lovey story
bit short but well written &described

Comment by April on 10/06/03
Dear Anne:
Another fine story from your keyboard.  A little bit of enjoyment to open the All Hallowed Even's Season. Thanx for the delightful tidbit. This was the very first time I have ever heard of a witch assuming a man's position or vice versa, with the principle and the little witch exchanging in the woods. Nice twist though. Perfect diyear round diguise for a good witch.  Scarily,April

Comment by Nellie D on 10/04/03
Slightly odd but another fine story from the fine imagination of Ann.

Comment by Annie O on 10/03/03
I guess I should say this in explanation: The boys who were followers needed a direction to go. There were many paths open to them: one was better than the others.
   Some learn lessons, others don't.

Comment by leah on 10/03/03
Dear Annie O!

This was fun and from a different direction. And all the Wiccan references were interesting and remindful.

However, the fates of the three punks left me a bit bothered. I guess the dumb brute, Charlie, ended up as a homeless beggar after a career as a mannequin.It may figure, but I cannot see the purpose. I can see Jason's and Mike's fates a little clearer, but Charlie's?  At any rate, just a bit more or even a follow-up on this trio (how their subsequent lives interact at times) might be interesting.

Thanks for opening the Hallowe'en festivities this year.    leah



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