wFYvZV Some  truly   fantastic  articles  on this website  ,  appreciate it for contribution.

LFuF41 Very neat post.Much thanks again. Cool.

oud2dN I value the article post.Really thank you! Much obliged.

rzLexR Hey, thanks for the post.Much thanks again.

A Beautiful, Beautiful story! Thank you so much for sharing it. JBG

Brandy,

You are amazing! It is like you reached into my head and pulled out my favorite dream. The main story line of Adam and Laine was exactly what I have always wished for. I am a straight male, but this was my most secret of day-dream stories. I did hope for more details of how Anya addapts to her new life (I'd love more sexual details also ;)). And I hope that you will add a few more chapters about how things go going forward. Most of all I want to thank you for taking my most fervent wish in the world and putting it on paper. I could never do this so well. I will share this story with my wife. I will also read this one again and again :) Thanks for a wonderful morning of pleasure and introspection.

Live long and keep writing!

Kevin

CHAPTER-9 THEY START ACCEPTING THE CHANGES IN THEIR BODIES EVEN AS THEY RETURN TO THE ISLAND. WILL THAT GUY TURNED INTO A SOW STILL BE ALIVE LIKE THE POOR ETERNAL VIRGIN IS? WILL TIRCE ALLOW THEM TO RETURN TO NORMAL OR EVEN TO MORTAL GIRL FORM. WHAT ABOUT THE COUPLE, WILL THEY STAY CHANGED OR WILL THEY BE RETURNED TO THEIR NORMAL FORM

NOW, ON THEIR WAY BACK, THEY START TO DISCOVER THE BENEFITS OF THE OTHER SEX.

REYNA IS SO SCARED OF TIRCE THAT SHE CAN NOT THINK OF GOING BACK. DOOMED TO BE A WHORE. BRANDY, QUITE A BREAK FROM THE NORM FOR YOU. IS THIS CIRCE OF GREEK MYTH

BRANDY, LOVE THE WAY THE LOCALS REACT TO ANY MENTION OF THE ISLAND

NOW THEY KNOW WHAT'S HAPPENING

WELL,SHE IS GETTING WORRIED THAT THE WITCH MAY HAVE DONE SOMETHING

POOR BEAR, HE IS BECOMING A GIRL IT SEEMS, BRANDY, YOU STINKE, I HAVE THE GIGGLES AGAIN

I WONDER WHAT THEY WISHED. BRANDY, SHAME ON YOU FOR GIVING ME THE GIGGLES

BRANDY, I JUST STARTED READING THIS SAGA. MEETING THAT WITCH WAS SURE ONE OF THE MOST INTERESTING EVENTS FOR THEM. I WAS CHUCKLING OVER THE WITCHES ATTITUDE TOWARDS THE COUPLE. MAYBE SHE SHOULD JOIN TEAM SMITE.

Along with Milady's Wiles these are two of the most compelling stories I have read. I am in the process of reading the rest. Well done Brandy. xx

Many Thanks, Brandy!

I liked your really nice, slow-going story. It gave me a pleasant afternoon in reading it. Very balanced between tension and leisurely pace.

Are you a German native speaker - at one place the word "Tante" is used instead of "aunt".

best wishes,
keep up the good work!

Shantiva

A wonderful story and a really gripping one I couldn't stop reading once I'd started. Absolutely masterful. WELL DONE !

Simply masterful!  It has been a while since I have read this but my enjoyment is just as great.  Some of the best love scenes and tenderness I have read anywhere. As always the pictures you paint Brandy are flawless, fascinating, and poignant. Your patience with the transformations is truly remarkable and allows us to savor the experience and truly identify with either character. I very highly recommend your story so others may have their own enjoyment.  The story has so many cute and fun interactions between Anya and Ethan that it resonates with enjoyment.

    Thank you for a good read.  You are so good at capturing the essence of what is happening to the characters that I really feel almost as if I was on that boat too.

Hugs,

Kristi    

I love your stories! You have to be the best cliff hanger artist in history.

I read these stories for their fiction, yet I am surprised when the action from previous chapters flow into the next chapters. Its a wonderful and refreshing change.

Keep it up!

Well, all i can say is thanks for this story, i really like the way you write.
Now i can judge and tell you that for me you have succeded with your tree objectives, i didn´t find any embarassment and pain in the stories i read, for the second objective i really find believable your stories it´s not like you are going to find a wich and that she make your wishes come true. But the feelings, believe me that by reading your stories i find so many things that i didn´t know that were in me, so for me you fulfill your second objective.
And for the third one, i don´t know if you are close to a TG, and i don´t know if i can fit in to that category but there are a lot of things in your stories, hell you can describe situations so well that i will have to give you your third objective as well.
Well now the only thing i can say is keep writing, i´ll keep reading your stories.

I have never read anything on any site which compared with " live long and prosper " You are truly gifted in your ability to express the emotions inherent in such a transformation. I think that your best work is transformations which were unintended by the person involved and the joy they experience in realizing the new parameters of their life. kudos

I finally got around to reading this story, and i'm very sorry.  Sorry that I took so long, that is.

The story is excellent.  The characters are well-drawn, complete people, whom the reader soon learns to care about.

The transformation is well done, with the mental changes being given more development, which is the way that I think it should be.  There were changes. but the characters stayed very much the same, and what did so, changed in a believable way.

The plot follows logically and realistically.

Reyna is a surprise, but a pleasant one who adds to the overall enjoyment of the work.

Congratulations, Brandy, on an excellent piece of work.

Ellie Dauber

I... am... stunned.  Never before have I read a TG story with as much depth and warmth.  My words here could NEVER do justice to those of Brandy.  I only have two questions at this point.  (Actually I have about ten billion, but two will suffice.)
1) HOW does she continue to put out work of this quality?
2) Why, in the name of all that is holy, is she not being paid for this???????????

Thank you, Brandy, for making my week.
Traci

I avoided this story for a longtime.  I kept noticing new chapters upon my visits here.  Today I was looking for a good read and saw a new chapter had been added and decided to read the "Reader's Comments".  When I saw all of the poisitve comments......I decided to gave it a try.  Read the first 7 installments without stopping!  

KUDOS.....GREAT STORY!   I will wait until more on another day.WHY?  I want to savor the story!  Can't wait to see what happens next.  BTW......hate to read the final chapter.....cause that will mean that the story is over!!  But so far......9.5 outta 10!

Very Good, I didnt stop till i Finished all 16 Chapters..Thank You

Brandy,
     Unlike many of my (fellow ?) contributors I enjoyed the slow build up to the meat of the story.  You build Characters and situations like a master sculpture chips away the marble away to reviel the treasure beneath.  Thank you and welcome back.
                                             Rose2

On a scale of one to ten, this story is an eleven. I just finished the conclusion and was sad to see it end. Thank you Brandy for this great story.

Wonderful story, I couldn't wait to read each fantastic chapter.
Please keep up the great work!

I'm still reading and enjoying this great story. This is a classic tale that should be required reading at Tg fiction sites.

(written after reading through episode 9)  Very good story.  I really like the slow nature of the transformation, but They should both be more suspicious of the relatively easy acceptance of their changes.  Since, unlike Reynaud/Reyna, they did good things for Tirce, she may have put something in the spell so they would enjoy the results of their transformations whether they would have enjoyed them unspelled or not.  

Good characters. I like the reaction to not being pregnant and the concern about the hip size and all.

Another good edition, keep going Brandy. Thanks for sharing such a good story with us.

Part 6 enjoyable and look forward to reading part 7. Love the descriptive work you did with the sensative skin in shower and the pace the story goes is the type I love the most. Always hated stories like Steven King's horror stories which is so bogged in detail I loss interest fast. Preferred the faster pace of R.L STINE despite my age.

I must say that after five shots of Brandy I am quite intoxicated. The pacing, the characters, the mood and foreshadowing, it's all starting to make my head swim.

So how about another shot Brandy? I can't wait.

Excellent story the latest part added Wednesday is my favorite so far.  Keep up the wonderful work.

I must say Brandy that I'm enjoying the hell out of this story.  One complaint though, this slow burn is driving me CRAZY.  I can't wait for the action to start.  Thanks for the effort.

Like several others, I've read this story (and just about all the others) at Brandy's site. Since she's my favorite TG writer, I'm delighted that she is circulating her stories on Crystal's site now. There are none better for character development, description, and drawing the reader into her stories. Her works compare very favorably to most mass-market fiction that I have read.

Excellent storytelling!!! I look forward to the next episode.
It combines my 2 favorite dreams: 1. Sailing around the world
2. A take your time TG story of the first caliber.
Thank you for you writing

This is great storytelling. I've been reading for two parts now and can't wait for the third. I'm not sure what they wished for, but I'll tell you my wish. I wish that part three would be posted as soon as possible.

Fantastic job.

Very Well written. Good characters - the witch seems to be circe. I wonder what they wished for - Goo, wouldn't it be great to sail around the ocean. Good start

Part 2 was a great continue from where you left off

Great story! I've never read it,but I'll go to Brandy's site now to do so, now that I have found this first chapter.Highly,highly recommended!I can't wait to see what happens next,a trait only the best writing will posess. Good show and All that!
zerker

I, too, read this story at Brandy's site.  I couldn't begin to tell you how much I enjoyed.  The story reminded me of a fine wine that your snill the bouquet, roll around on your tongue, and savor every second of.  The story develops extremely well and you grow to care about the characters.  I can't wait for your new stories to be posted.

I read this one before on Brandy's site and enjoyed it very much. I failed to comment on it at that time. The story is a masterful work of detail and discription. It has very good character build up along a good plot line. I recommend it to all.

Brandy.

 I originally read this tale at your site and liked it very much.  As I stated in my email to you, I have always considered you one of the best writers in the TG genre and this tale did nothing to alter that opinion.  Your characters are so rich and well developed that, sometimes the plotline takes a back seat to their developement.  You get a big thumbs up from me on this one, Brandy.  I hope this new policy of yours, that of posting your tales to other sites, will continue.  Thanks for your hard work in writing and you did a bang up job on this one, as I expected you would.  Huggles from my heart to yours.  Welcome back.
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