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Look, Ladies, His Boobies!
by Ian Elliott

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Comment by jjconn on 07/03/17
as soon as she said“ i can support myself ” you should have divorced her, seeing you just lost your job legally during a marriage if she makes twice what you do or did she has to pay you at least till your on your feet it's called alimony!!!!

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Comment by crorkz on 08/04/14
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Comment by Leia on 05/05/12
Excellent beginning story,.. can't wait for the sequels!

Comment by Silvia. on 05/14/11
DISGUSTING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Comment by john on 06/10/09
oh we just have to have this one go on - - and on  - - - and on. Such a lot of potential for some devilry!!

Comment by Priscilla Ann on 06/05/08
Sounds as if Briana has reached the point of no return and will serve as Mistress Janet's maid as long as Mistress chooses. Great story. More please

Comment by juliej on 05/19/07
more please graet story to be continued we hope well done

Comment by juliej on 05/27/06
this is a good start to a story that seems to have a slow begiining but hopefully will improve on other writings i feel ian gave in to quickly with to little fuss yes he didnot have much of a choice but i t should have harder for him to agree

Comment by SassySue on 05/25/06
Nice story from a first time poster.  I enjoyed it quite a bit.

I felt the story could have been fleshed out a little more (no pun intended).  For example, the growth of Ian's boobies could have been described over several months, or how Ian felt about it as he saw them grow.

Anyway, keep on writing.  I'm sure your efforts will improve in the future.
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