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A Losing Season
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Comment by stanley morton on 06/24/07
I want to know what was lost and Tigger needs to do a sequel where Micheal, Jane and Barbara destroy the Institution that created Micheal. Believe me, Jane can take on Saint Andrews and win after a few of the Saint Andrews "boys" attack Michelle and Beth, forcing both to take a man in thier mouth and anus. Such an attack would destroy Saint Andrews and let Micheal recreate it as his own school as well as giving Jane several new "clients" to train. Then we could see several of jane's older "girls" help to turn bad boys into good girls Comment by suna on 02/22/06 I have now read all the 'Jane'stories I could find and this is the last. I left it for last after reading the author's note that the story took a different track. I wonder if the author will ever read this since it has been years since any new chapters. Comment by jasmine on 08/23/04 Tigger, very long considering most of what is here. That is a good thing, i like reading novels. Just brilliant, dearly loved it a lot. Comment by Kristi Fitzpatrick on 06/03/04 Dear Tigger: Comment by Diane Sutton on 11/12/02 I can't help but think Rose2 was commenting on a different story as I have done something like that before. Comment by Rose2 on 11/27/01 A truely wonderful look into a possible magical lifestyle. Light and Dark. A great read for anyone who was ever interested in magic and magic users, "Bewitched" and "I Dream of Jeanie" have nothing on our Tigger. Beware intence R rated plus sex. |
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