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A Losing Season
by Tigger

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Comment by stanley morton on 06/24/07
I want to know what was lost and Tigger needs to do a sequel where Micheal, Jane and Barbara destroy the Institution that created Micheal. Believe me, Jane can take on Saint Andrews and win after a few of the Saint Andrews "boys" attack Michelle and Beth, forcing both to take a man in thier mouth and anus. Such an attack would destroy Saint Andrews and let Micheal recreate it as his own school as well as giving Jane several new "clients" to train. Then we could see several of jane's older "girls" help to turn bad boys into good girls

Comment by suna on 02/22/06
I have now read all the 'Jane'stories I could find and this is the last. I left it for last after reading the author's note that the story took a different track. I wonder if the author will ever read this since it has been years since any new chapters.  

I have enjoyed all the 'Jane' stories I read before this one. The easier successes of the program refered to gave the written ones a good background for the 'special' circumstances in each story.  
I have to say I am disappointed in this one.  The dispicable set-up confrontation at the mothers home after deciding that to disgrace he/r mother was not what s/he wanted being so quickly forgotten as to return to Jane's home and forgive both Jane and the mother was too contrived.  No matter how much he may have loved them the trust would never return. He would always feel the plotting, wondering what would be done next 'all for his best interests' The thoughts of what he would do for his children (or more to the point - to them) would never go so far as what was done to him. The 'little' plots of other stories are not nearly as damaging to his self-worth as this plot. Also I doubt the paring of Janice and Michael would have happened in later stories as she is just and coniving and manipulative a character as Jane.

I am sory that you needed a 'happy' ending to the most wicked behavior of all the 'Jane' stories it just dosent fit.

Comment by jasmine on 08/23/04
Tigger, very long considering most of what is here. That is a good thing, i like reading novels. Just brilliant, dearly loved it a lot.

I would be curious what the mothers reaction would have been if he were serious about the son being gone. if he truly wanted to be a her for ever, chose to where feminine attire all the time, live as a girl 24 hours a day and inquire on SRS.

Comment by Kristi Fitzpatrick on 06/03/04
Dear Tigger:


   What a wonderful masterpiece. I have been reading for hours and I don't want the story to be over even yet! Yet it is. The struggles and crisis here are worthy of a masterpiece of literature of days gone by. I like all of your Aunt Jane stories very much but this takes the cake. This story is on caliber with the best of TG fiction anywhere. Also, there is a stronger enjoyment of crossdressing than most of Jane's students experience. That was appreciated.

   My only regret is that the assault was not really resolved and Michelle did not allow herself to face that demon head on, though that can take years, I know. I sensed that there was enough conflict for that to get resolved along with everything else.


   My biggest upset was about the inheritance but I guess that would be a spoiler to say to much. The call girl thing was a  little over the top too.

   Usually I am upset that there are so few reviews. I am upset of course but more than that if that is any indication of how many people have enjoyed this story then you have missed out on something magnificent.

 I for one want to encourage you Tigger so maybe you will write another Season's story. Please do. You are a fabulous writer.

   Hugs,

   Kristi

   

Comment by Diane Sutton on 11/12/02
I can't help but think Rose2 was commenting on a different story as I have done something like that before.

However, this alternate ending to one of Tiggers great works is a great testiment of her abilities to convey a very well thought out story.

Yes, it may be long for some people but this is just up my alley as I do so enjoy a story that captivates and holds my attention where I just don't wish it to end.

With the other tales Tigger has given us with regards to Aunt Jane I find a ready compilzation of stories to read that although have very similar themes still engross me with great charm.

One of the best authors to come down the pike I'd venture to say. Her use of words and sentence structure is a wounderfull addition to this site and any site she decides to post on.

Diane

Comment by Rose2 on 11/27/01
 A truely wonderful look into a possible magical lifestyle.  Light and Dark.  A great read for anyone who was ever interested in magic and magic users, "Bewitched" and "I Dream of Jeanie" have nothing on our Tigger.  Beware intence R rated plus sex.



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