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Lost Balls
by Jennifer White

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Comment by thewallis on 04/03/19
Mike was never a real man he should have just given the bitch a good hiding. Job done.

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 03/26/06
<<  "Okay" said Erin. "It is a deal. Every Friday after work, you'll become Andrea. And you'll be her, until we go to bed on Sunday. You will act as a woman, think like a woman, and *be* a woman for that time. For a whole year."  >>

Warning bells should be going off in Mike's mind.  He should make it clear that his agreement is a trade for no dates with men for either of them.  And that nothing possibly permanent or that would affect his masculine image during the week is to be done to him.

Comment by Morgan Thomas on 03/25/06
Jennifer is a prolific writer and I enjoy many of her stories. This one is no exception. It's inventive and entertaining. Some proof reading would have helped as there are a few typos throughout but not so many as to destroy the pleasure of reading it.

Thanks for continuing to write Jennifer!






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