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Lost Boy
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Shauna on 11/25/03
Hi there!!  Wow, what a great story.  I luved the way Astrid controlled them so completely and quickly.  I luved the sexual preference change in Jamie, good touch.  Please continue and let us know what happens.  Maybe Astrid can check in and add to Jamie's wants as she goes along.  heehee

smiles
shauna

Comment by linda marie on 11/25/03
Great story.  It made me want to read more of your work.  The way Astrid controlled both Craig and Jaime was very exciting.  I hope you write more in this area.

Comment by Sissy Patricia on 11/24/03
I loved this story!  It was well written and although I guessed some of the plot twists before they occurred, I enjoyed seeing the facile manipulation of both Jamie and Craig/Jillian by the wicked Astrid.  My only wish was that there had been a greater degree of frank submission and humiliation forced upon Craig by first Astrid, and later Jamie.  Also, it might have been more effective if Astrid maintained herself as Mistress after having enslaved both with her charms.  Please do write more on this theme.  I will go and read some of your other postings now.
Sissy Patricia

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 11/22/03
Arrrrrrggghh!   WHY?????



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