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Lost Presumed Missing
by Zoneefem

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Comment by Silvia. on 05/20/13
Earle June said, where's the rest of the story?
I ask, where is it?

Comment by Leia on 08/06/12
Cute:-)

Comment by Gillian on 01/12/09
On one hand, it's a bit too long to be a joke and lacks a proper punchline.  

On the other hand, as a story it needs more after the revelations to give it a sense of closure.


Comment by Early June on 10/14/04
Where's the rest of the story?  It is good as far as it goes. It gets the reader wrapped up in the problems of the heroes, and is written well enough to make one feel with them. Then, it stops.  I am diappointed. You did such a good job up to the chopped off ending.

Comment by Jaqueline Spratte on 11/19/03
Please check your terminology.

Pre-op Transvestite?    transsexuals are those who plan to go through the op, transvestites are not.


other than this and the abrupt ending not too bad a story



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