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The Lottery
by Kristie Knight

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Comment by whyguys on 08/28/13
Okay... a bit dark.  Yet, what the heck, why not allow the Female Sex exact a bit of cathartic fantasy revenge after some 10,000 years of being sent to the back of the cave.  Besides, letting them vent just might keep them from REALLY punishing and humiliating the new 'weaker sex'.  

Look to the bright side, there's a bit of irony and humor in this concerning how modern society reveres the stupidity of "reality" television, which may be the true brain deadening elixir to numb our minds from the cradle to college degrees.

And then there's an even bigger perk for the future male... aren't you all envious of and salivating for those Y-chromosome to die for
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"beautiful Nine-West satin blue dress, Versacchi bustier and stockings, and those gorgeous Manolo Blahnik stilettos"
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before the Females push the button on you!!!!


Comment by lee lee on 07/24/08
I think I read this   but wait   No it is  so vicious and femdom that I nearly came without touching my sissy clit even once. The last part was incredibly wicked   these poor sissies  strapped on a cunt sucking platform for the rest of their silly lives..disgusting! But as I was wondering if those poor dears missed their male hard ons I noticed mine sitting up begging to be a clit   and my tongue got wet thinking it would forever just suck and lick pussy   fem dom forever!!!! tee hee  

Comment by Chelsea on 04/28/08
I think I'm a little traumatized by this story, to think that we as women would stoop this low... just is wrong. I mean... I know men have been treating us like crap for centuries but this... this is a little much... Not to mention how arrogant they themselves are getting, it's going to be a war, and that's not what anyone needs. True equality is what this world needs, it may never get it but I'll always fight for it.

Comment by christine01 on 03/22/08
these women are vicious.  
They will totally alter men to women, and not let them integrate into society as women. thats so sad.



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