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The Lovely Couple
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Diane Morrill on 10/12/09
You had me smiling from the moment Mark met Dr Betsy. What a neat surprise you sprang on me, you clever, diabolical devil... a cancer operation becomes sex reassignment surgery... nice going!
I suppose that sometimes, for some of us, having male genitals truly IS a form of cancer... but that's another story.
In the end, turn-about is fair play, and, do we not always get what we deserve?

Comment by juliej on 07/22/07
another great story it is revenge again but the style and the twist through out are wonderfull

Comment by don(na?) on 10/18/06
Well, I really liked this story.  Yes, she became a lot like he used to be.  From experience, when the wife becomes the bread-winner, Thats what happen to her, she sellects her pleasures after a hard day, just the way a guy does.

The husband can go along, or go.  If he goes along, best if he does so enjoyably.

Don't know why, but life gets better than ever that way, if its accepted.  Or am I different?


Comment by TIna Michelle Smith on 06/21/04
Perhaps my comments are fueled by my own experience, since I am a cancer survivor, and have had to endure the pain of chemotherapy, radiation, and surgery, and must now wear a colostomy appliance.  I found this story to be in extremely poor taste, devoid of any redeeming qualities.
It's a pity.  I have enjoyed Jennifer's stories in the past, and might enjoy them again some day.  Right now, I am hurt.  I don't think I'll be reading her contributions for a very long time.

Comment by RugMonster on 06/18/04
Wow. The Heroine of the story turned out to be worse than the 'Evil' man. Not only did she take up all of his old faults, but was unfaithful to boot. So...I guess the moral is that if you've been wronged, there's no need to be better than the person that hurt you. Not a very good story, as both characters turned out to be evil and unlikable.

Comment by Jane Hudson on 06/18/04
Its a fun story but if you was the wife would you ever feel safe knowning that the women there you changed by lies and you have to sleep sometime .I would want that new woman out of my life pay her off and just start over because while you sleep knives can go in. I would alway be wondering  if and when

Comment by linzi on 06/18/04
he wouldnt have fallen for that.and id have a third or forth opinion xxxxxx



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