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Love Thy Neighbor's Saree
by Josephine Gonsalves

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Comment by Meera on 03/01/11
Very good stories.For those who are interested to see my photos
please mail me to my id meera_naveena@yahoo.co.in
Comment by Paula on 02/14/10
Great Story. Loved the older women Crossdressing the submissive male. Wish there had also been some femdom :)
Comment by Amanda on 09/04/06
That was a beautiful story, especially with Rina (Irian). Are you going to continue with there relationship?
Comment by Sammit Thomas on 09/01/04
Its nice story but little more humiliation should be there like teasing of ajay by jaya friends & making to dance & act like a women. Please do write some stories on indian men forced to wear indian ethic wear & humiliated by women.
Comment by Leslie Louise DuPaix on 07/15/03
Very good stories.  Actually both are similar in theme and well done, but of the two the later two-part one is the better.  What I believe makes them good is that they seem to be possible.

I made my own sari (or saree) quite some time ago, and wrote about it in a column.  I suspet my column still may be on the net.  Search "sari leslie louise dupaix" and I am sure you will find it.  I think I may get my sari out and dress for dinner.  Again, good stories.
Comment by April on 07/07/03
Dear Josephine:
This is a nice story, loving in its presentation.  The characters are adequate for the lenght of the piece and the plot was well crafted.  I was happy with the outcome, even if it meant the lady was breaking her marriage vows. You have written a talented essay. Now I will have to find your other works to enjoy them also.
Comment by Vahi on 07/05/03
That is just absolutely beautiful. I cum from the subcontinent myself and can really identify with the story..... Please....please...Josephine...make this a series...show Jaya developing into a confident and happy young woman.... perhaps she will go out with a man and maybe even get married???? I have some story ideas if you are interested for CD stories from the subcontinent...drop me a line if interested.


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