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Comment by matz crorkz on 12/17/14
AhvLfN Great, thanks for sharing this article.Really looking forward to read more. Want more. Comment by matzcrorkz on 08/03/14 NBPhpC Say, you got a nice post.Really thank you! Keep writing. Comment by Bruce on 10/25/09 damn, you either have wild friends or a mind the left the bldg long ago Comment by Mistress Meredith on 06/13/09 My, my Marco; you poor darling. Maggi and Sami and the rest of the girls certainly put you in a very humiliating, precarious position, didn't they? My, my; you poor dear -- serves you right, young lady. Comment by Dianna on 05/20/08 Hun...I was extremely upset by the way he was treated. Comment by Marco on 11/22/06 Your attitude Intrigues Me JulieJ... Id Like more contact... Comment by juliej on 10/06/06 my my you are a sweet one. Comment by Marco on 09/28/06 Hey Julie J...How would you like me to Lick you all over with my rough tongue and Kiss you more sensuously than you have Ever been Kissed...and take you to hights of exctacy beyond your most erotic fantasies? Call me.. Moi! Comment by julie j on 08/03/05 a second read a good story but needs to be longer with what happened next and after did his wife continue so many different things that could be done but is to short Comment by julie j on 09/11/04 it was wellwriten the story was to shor and i would have liked to read more of marcos humiliation Comment by Marco.. on 04/16/04 well it had to be written with haste as that was an integral part of the story, the helpless way He felt, and the hopeless inevitability...and the rushed way In which He was dressed and dragged to his fate...Thanks for reading...Mwaaah!!! Comment by julie on 03/08/03 an interesting story could have more enforcement in it and has scope for more had it been set out in a different way Comment by Ralph on 01/16/03 Paragraphs. Paragraphs. Paragraphs. It's a little to hard to read the way it's formatted. |
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