Crystal's Story Site
· Return to Story Index Page · Add your Comments ·

Story Comments by Readers

Magician's Assistant
by Deane Christopher

Latest comments are shown at top of page.


Comment by Bob on 12/09/11
Totaly enjoyed the story. Hope the next is as good.

Comment by Julianna on 06/16/08
I love stories about men being transformed into women and then forced to be her magicians assistant. These stories allow the women who have been magicians assistant to get some revenge. I would love to see more of the stories and wish you well

Comment by Yoron on 05/24/08
As far as the writing style goes It seems ok.
But when one looks at the story line it goes down the sewer.
If one want a 'wanking story' perhaps, but this one is to long for that.

As far as I understand we have a normal (?) guy being transmuted into a hooker for lack of a better word with the libido and behavior of a mink?

And he gets cross examined and taken advantage of, as a birthday present, by his coworkers?
And they not only allow it and want to grope him, they encourage it too?

I'm getting so f*ng tired of reading pure infantile stupidity.
Building a storyline means that you make your characters behave inside the ramifications of your 'constructed' social grid.

What that 'grid' would need to be for this kind of transformation and behavior I have real difficulties imaging.

Perhaps some Russian Circus led by the Russian Mob filled to the brim with 100% Vodka?
You know, dead drunk, hairy kind of Neanderthals equipped with enormous... Whips?  
All of them of course, including the, ah, more delicate fairer sex.

You definitely need to make your story line at least remotely plausible before I can find the effort in me to read it all.

Cheers
Yoron.


Comment by Francesca barrie on 03/17/01
A very good,magical story with lots of twists and turns.In short a thoroughly good,erotic tale of magical transformation. I really enjoyed it.I thought the narrative was very good but the dialogue could do with a little bit of "polish" if you know what I mean

Comment by Paul jutras on 03/03/01
Part 7 was one of my favorite sections of the tale.

Comment by Mr Man on 03/03/01
This was a nice conclusion to a fun and entertaining story. Thanks for writing it.

Comment by Mr Man on 02/25/01
Just wanted to let you know that I'm still reading and enjoying this story. Thanks for writing.

Comment by Mr Man on 02/03/01
Another fine addition to the story. I have just one question. Where will Megatrix be appearing next? I would like to be her assistant!

Comment by rlee on 01/24/01
This is a great story. Very imaginative. I like stories where a man is hypnotized into cross dressing.

Comment by Mr Man on 01/22/01
This has been a great continuation to a fine story, and you've added some twists and turns that were highly original and unexpected. Good job and thanks for writing!

Comment by Mr Man on 01/14/01
I always enjoy stories with a magical slant to them, and I like the magician's assistant idea very much. Keep going with this story so we can find out what happened to the birthday boy. Thanks for writing!

Comment by jimmy in white on 01/14/01
i feel that you have maDE a truly wonderful story& i'm looking forword too the next few chapters too see what happens too jeff/jasmine & her friends.

Comment by Nellie D on 01/13/01
I almost didn't read this one, I don't like the doll/mannequin keyword stories. Deane has crafted a fine story with enough twists and turns to keep one's attention.

Comment by Paul jutras on 01/13/01
Having read the stories on Sheckey's Illusion Archive I found your story here one of the best Magician stories I've read.

Comment by Mudhen on 01/13/01
Great start Deane! Can't wait for the following chapters.



Add your Comments

      The importance of reader feedback cannot be overstated.   Authors rely on it to improve their future works, and it gives them the incentive to write more stories if they know that their hard work has been appreciated.  I am not saying that comments must all be lauditory.  Authors often appreciate honest, constructive criticism over simple remarks like 'Great story', although simple praise is appreciated also.  There is no limit on how much you can enter in the 'comments' box.   Sentences will automatically word wrap at the end of the line so please do not use your carriage return/enter key except at the end of your paragraphs.

      It is not necessary to use your real name here, and, email addresses are optional.  Posting your email address will allow the author to thank you for taking the time to post your comments, and/or discuss critiques and address possible concerns. 

      Be forewarned that abusive remarks and language will be removed, and the posters may be banned from this AND other areas of StorySite.



Name :
E-Mail : (Optional & Confidential)
Comments :
 
  

Please report any problems to Crystal