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First off, I love the two Magician's Assistant stories.  They're quite entertaining.  I also like that the 2nd story introduced Magatrix. However, I think it was just plain mean to end Friends and Lovers with a couple characters noticing issues and then just stopped.  I mean, you could've skipped writing the epilogue.  You could've written an epilogue without a teaser.  Or, the best option of all, you could've, sometime in the almost 3 years between writing that epilogue and now, written a sequel.

On the bright side, the only stories of yours I've read thus far are the two Magician's Assistant stories so at least you've got a lot of text left for me to read.  But write a sequel already.  If you feel like the epilogue doesn't lead anywhere interesting, then just write a brief prologue wherein it's resolved and then write a story taking place much later which follows a similar formula but with Nicole being the magician.

I want more!

Note: You can take all this whining as a compliment; I wouldn't want more if I didn't enjoy the stories :)


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Ok, *now* I've read *all* your stories.  I loved all of them except The Werewoman Chronicles 1: Life's A Bitch and I Would If I Could, which just didn't have enough plot to satisfy me.  It's probably more my fault than yours; I tend to favor longer stories.

By the way, I want more Heel stories, too.  Write more!!

Once again I have had the pleasure of reading another story by the self proclaimed "Word Smith". If I could have one wish, it be that the next story is no so long in coming.

I like it, but the characters talk in this weirdly bouncy way where every other sentence has an exclamation point, and it takes them three paragraphs to actually say anything.

lot of potential for the future parts