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Magic Pink Bubble
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Comment by Grupo on 07/11/12
Tom and Kay were recently at our Gospel Celebration and we had them for drenniso were able to visit more. Â I am interested in sponsoring a child. Would like moreinformation about how you adopt one. Â Also would like to receive the newletter. Comment by STEPHANIE on 10/31/11 hey where is part 2 of the story so i can see wat happend to jimmy Comment by Johnny on 04/08/10 The story "Magic Pink Bubble" is outstanding!! Please give us what happens when Sally displays Jimmy to her coven! Comment by Silvia. on 12/19/09 Bad story, I didn't like. Comment by whyguys on 04/02/09 Gosh, M.F, it must be getting tiresome hearing me give laud to your tales! Love the machinations of the 30 year old spinster, Sally Ashmede (whom I still can imagine as quite a HOTTIE!) in "Magic Pink Bubble". I was especially impressed by the manner you ended this first installment. The mood created by having Sally masturbate while contemplating her plans for Jimmy cuts to the crux of what is so potent about Female Supremacist forced feminization to some of us. The idea that a Female would take such ultimate taunting delight as she thinks about debasing our supposed manhood, leaves guys like us feeling like the quivering insignificant subjugated and humiliated jello we know we should be. |
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