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The Magic Trick
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Chelsea on 04/11/08
Oh jeez it seems to me this so called magic council is about as useless as a bump on a log. Why do they let these horrible people get away with doing this to people, she said it was just for a lesson, then she made it permanent. Now he will never learn, and someday may seek revenge and she would deserve whatever happened to her. You do not get to steal someone's life and get away with it. She will pay if not by him than by Karma.

Comment by Leah on 04/11/08
Surely you're not going to let Kathryn get away with this!?! Her mother and the coven may be momentarily amused, but on the more serious side, they will know that Kathryn has 'way overstepped her bounds. Her infraction is probably at least as serious as the one Glenn was trying to perpetrate.

No short "in and out" piece here, Jennifer. This one requires continuation!




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