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Maiden's Pageant
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Comment by Mariah on 05/09/13
That's the kind of mom I wish I had, how cool is she! Well done Janet. Comment by Tambrey on 12/12/11 Phenomenal breakdown of the topic, you sulhod write for me too! Comment by cathy angela davis on 07/31/08 i really liked your story it was kind as always Comment by cathy angela davis on 07/31/08 ASD USUAL I LIKED YOUR STORY KEEP IT UP Comment by Stanley Morton on 07/28/07 What a sweet story Janet. Diane is accepted into the pageant. Her mom finally comes to terms with Diane's wish to stay a girl. Everybody knoes she will stay a girl, even when she denies it. Now, Diane needs to become a WOMAN and marry. Comment by Anne on 08/01/03 I love the mothers in your stories. But why doyor heroines always wear pantihose? I think stockings and a garter belt, girdle or corset is much more exciting. The act of carefully sliding a sheer stocking up an outstretched leg and then smoothing it with your hands gently, before fastening garters to the dark top welt is my idea of true femininity. Comment by "Princess Pervette" on 05/14/01 This is one of my favorite genres, and the fact that the pageant was an official function instead of a casual dress-up made it all the better. Comment by Susan on 05/08/01 I just adore stories where the son is turned into a daughter by his mother.The crowning glory is when he gets to date a boy and takes to it so naturally.Well done indeed. Comment by Jamie Elizabeth Burgess on 03/27/01 Janet, This is a very good story and well organized like most of your stories. Like, "The Job" it is well crafted for someone in their mid-twenties, But I'm much older. I don't mind being read, when I'm out, what I want is a loosening of the gender rules (most of your stories reflect acceptance of gender diversity) where both sexes can experience what they envy without censure. I'm a student of the psyche and working on the shadow concept, the part of the self that must be suppressed for the ego to be acceptable in society. Because sex and gender issues are in everyone's shadow, which we have been trained to suppress, it's easy to feel irrational anger and commit hate crimes on those of us who have accepted ourselves. The "demon" part of my shadow makes me irrationally angry at the gender cops. We have a lot of potential to change society in a positive, healing way through the reduction of domestic violence, divorce, and child care. |
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