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Maiden Voyage
by Janet L. Stickney

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Comment by Mariah on 04/28/13
Such a beautiful story with a good lesson to be remembered about adultery slipped in.  Nice touch Janet.

Comment by Sharon on 04/05/10
That was such a beautiful story.It is so lovely when mothers help their son be a beautiful girl.

Comment by Stanley Morton on 07/19/07
Well Janet, a different story all together. Like all your stories, well done. But when does Rita start taking the hormone? You never show it . No other critique than that. If you continue this story, tell of Rita's wedding and time with her beloved. and her mom's new husband too.

Comment by Rone Welles on 10/19/06
When we read stories they leave us thinking what would happen or
what did happen .. this story tells all and is complete
no doubt about it   .... the rest of the story...what dreams are made of...

thank you Janet for sharing with us and for such talented fingers
with a mind and heart to match ..  peace Rone




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