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A Maid Man
by Patricia Violet

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Comment by Yoron on 06/02/08
Not possible.
Just a disturbed fantasy.

Yoron


Comment by juliej on 03/10/08
the story was interesting fast paced i am surprised that the guy ashley even though he was a wimp let her push him aroud so much

Comment by lee lee on 01/07/08
Am I missing something in this story?  It is a fantasy, a fiction, and story that is meant to tittilate the sexual senses right?  It did that for me.  I am a male who entered the world of sissies when my mother dressed me at the age of 8.  I am not a poor soul being abused by those I seek to take advantage of my situation indeed I seek them out. When I read this story I role played Ashley at my computer and as I read it I was hoping she would be taking hormones and sure enough it was in the last chapter...now we know this story is fiction but take it from me we also know that in reality there are very similar situations of role reversal and both being happy. I am a marreid man and my wife knows of my sissy feelings and she does take advantage of them with my consent. WOuld you be surprised to know that I love to cook and clean the house and do the laundry We both hate doing windows so we share that. I cross dress ( casually in lingerei) with my wife's consent but not encouragement  I never dress in front of her.   But I love Ashley's role and do not see his "maid" as cruel at all but only a person able to see the depth of another persons needs and match them to hers.  Just my perspective and yes I loved the story It had a nice flow  ( although this could not have happened in just one summer, the transformation that is) and yes it was hurried near the end   But end with the happy sub sissy and his happy female lover enjoying the sex most of us are forbidden to have   Thanks for this nice sereis of stories  

Comment by Danielle leigh-Anne O'Bryan on 03/10/07
Hello Patricia:

  I do apologize. I can not believe how hard this 'Fantasy' struck me! You write very well and gain access to your readers very soul! I commend your skills.
 
  I am gratified a trifle to know that there is some small attachment of the Author to the Characters. You are right that we, all of us authors, use sites like this one to air out our psyche's.

  Further I must admit that there are indeed people out in this sad world that need to be dominated, humiliated, and made less. Their sad lives have been made that way by parents, teachers, friends (enemies), and even spiritual guides. Even you must admit that this is not a normal, default way of thinking/living. It is created!

  So, granting their exsistance, I have to grant the exsistance of people who, in their created, needful way have to prey on the above lesser folk!

  This, unfortunately, brings us to the right and wrong of this whole issue! Both unfortunates need each other but is it moraly, ethicaly, or even humane to allow such perverted actions to take place.

  We as responsible humans should try to help cure or mitigate such Hells that these people go through. Both the prey and the hunters. If we had a family member say, with a severe debilitating drug addiction, wouldn't we go out of our way to help that person. I would hope that we wouldn't see this as an opportunity to make money buy selling them more drugs?

  I do carry on. I love my soap box, but I am not a bad person. I care deeply. That is my only curse! I seem to see beyond the stories offered here and see the pain of those who write. I also, every once in a while, see a story that so closely paralels mine or a close friends life that I lose the ability to back off and see the story as just that, a story.

  So, once again I apologize and hope you can forgive a foolish old woman who has seen way too much pain and suffering for her own good.

Goddess Bless!

Danielle


Comment by Danielle leigh-Anne O'Bryan on 03/09/07
Patricia:

  I recieved your E-Mail and to give you the benefit of the doubt I read the story again.

  Your suggestion of reading it in a "suspended belief" state didn't work I'm afraid!

  I still see the same manipualative machinations. The devastating psychological brain washing tecniques used by covert opperatives since the conception of war.

  I still see a woman, who seems unable to exist in the world on her own, take advantage of truly kind and delicate Man who would never hurt a soul, and twist him into a parody of himself for her amusement.

  I still feel this story is coming from deep within the author. There must be deep seated reasons why you feel this is okay! Were you abused by men, women, or both? I feel very sorry for you but angry at the same time.

  One 'good' thing is that your writing ability stirs the soul!

  I would be gratified to see such great potential channeled into a story about Love, not hate. There is already way too much hate in the world and to add more is just silly!

  Please try a Love story! I think it would do you good!

  Not all men, nor women, for that matter, are evil! There still is a lot kindness, softness, and understanding out there. Granted, it is harder to find as those of such persuasion are afraid of comming out mainly because of people like your story says you are!

  I do apologize for comming on too strong, but I hoped the shock value would bring you around.

  I would love to hear from you again but let's put the pretense of 'Just a Fantasy' aside. Okay?

  Goddess Bless!

  Danielle


Comment by Danielle on 02/27/07
Why is it that you think that women should be allowed to do what a man would be jailed for. It doesn't matter which gender does it... Rape is rape. Can you just see the headlines if a man treated a woman like this.
 This isn't fantasy! This is a license for cruelty, humiliation, and mental manipulation.
 I hope to all the Gods and Goddesses in all the universe that you wake up tomorrow as this poor soul.

Comment by Daring Diane on 02/18/07
I like it, especially the whole teasing him part on the way.  The end was a bit rushed and contrived, but all in all an enjoyable read.



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