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This story is excellent. Please finish turning Victor into Victoria.

This was a very interesting story.  I wish that you would continue it.

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Great story, very erotic and creative.

I understand that it was quite some time ago the first four chapters were written. Is there a part five somewhere or was it never finished?

MISTRESS JAYNE, you are to be CONGRATULATED. This is one of the finest examples of female domination, forced feminization and poetic justice I've read in a very long time. Victor/Victoria (just perfect) is in for some serious humiliation and punishment, all well earned; that much is apparent (the school girl uniform is just perfect). And I agree with Mistress Patricia's comment made four years ago: it would be wonderful to have some of the female police officers little Victoria harassed and bullied brought into his/her punishment. I do hope you will continue this wonderful story someday.

Upon revisting Mistress Jayne and her sissy maids, it is even more apparent that Mistress Jayne is a consumate professional, who truely knows how to exact the perfect revenge upon her subjects and sees to it that they spend the rest of their days (and nights) enduring perfectly poetic punishment (Justice). Excellently told story. And of course, such a pleasure to read how Victoria gets her just desserts.

One of the best stories of its kind. Too bad it appears that it will not be continued. Victoria has so much more comeuppance he/she should have to endure. Oh well . . .

Love the story. Well written and it leaves you wanting more.  Have read the first four and it's been almost six months waiting for the fifth chapter.  Hope to see it soon...

I don't read many X rated stories, but this one was very well written.  It's an unusually suspenseful story, captivating it's readers.  Well done.

Love this story, so well written, with excitement and tension building after each episode. Would love to see Victor try to escape being a school girl and have to be taken even further back to being a toddler in diapers and frilly dresses, with restraints. I liked the idea from another reader who suggested that the women cops are behind this. The story is erotic, sexy and has lots of ways for Victor to be further humiliated..!

Please keep the episodes coming as this is a really great story with plenty of humiliating suprises. Kind Regards, Sarah

UP through chapter 4 and the story is still developing.  What a good job you have done so far.  By keeping he "client" and the ending in suspense you are pulling your readers along, waiting for the next action.
With her deceits of the situations, as depicted by her pictures to her "Client", she is no more trustworthy than the dirty cop.  The escape route? To where? I'm not sure there is any place left to go. His former residence gone, no friends. Clad how? Even if he eluded all the surveillance, he can't hitch hike in pink lingerie. :)

This is so good a story cant wait for the next bit Victor up to something I dont think he will give up with out a fight.Would it  not be a shock if rather than a maid Misstress Jayne turns Victor  the bad cop into Victoria the good cop and have her doing good police work to serve and protect . I think that outcome would be a shock ending to the story  but I dont think that will happpen maid uniforms for Victoria from now but she will look cute.But which everway it goes its a cracker.More soon please. OH can I have Jayne address maybe she could work her magic on me.

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I can hardly wait to find out more about this mytserious client. A former conquest?  A vindictive criminal?  The boys down at the precinct?  Hmmm.

Great job!
janie

Its great work again, very inspiring. Love your work

an excellent story  you have a very special story gift its amazing the way it was written sloley with care& thought it would be interesting to write a bit more a bout this story as victor goes through training and revenge for people including female collegues he worked with there is more scope for this story brilliant

I loved the story and have been waiting to see another chapter. I hope you have not given up on this story it is just starting to get juicy. :)

Love this story . She gives that bad arse what for!!!!

What a talented writer you are and very suspenseful. I cannot wait till you draw in some of the woman police officers.........

Mistress Patricia

Great part one..really enjoyed the plot.  I'm sure that future parts will be just as intriquing..thanks

Well, Mistress Jayne, I'm confident you have Crystal's readership all a twitter. (No, I didn't allege that I'm unsusceptible!)

This first installment has plenty of our kind of action done in a fairly debonaire style that I'm sure caught everyone off guard several times. Whence now? There are so many paths to tread from this point. One has to wonder what you have in mind for Victor.

And with that in mind, you have the explanation for our impatience. But do take the necessary time and effort to follow up your engrossing beginning with a worthy continuation!

Thank you!!!!  Can't wait for part two soon!!!!

Loved the story.  Please continue it.