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Maid to Serve
by Maid Candy

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Comment by crorkservice on 07/18/14
MRGI3n Enjoyed every bit of your article post. Really Great.

Comment by Sam on 01/31/14
Great story,i really enjoyed it.Well done

Comment by ashley on 02/14/13
Another one I had to read again. Great !

Comment by julih on 12/14/12
intresting partone

Comment by Silvia. on 06/08/11
Very bad story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Comment by ashley on 05/03/10
What a great wife to  have and treating her spouse so lovingly. Hot and horny , nicely done.

Comment by ashley on 05/02/10
cant wait to read part 2

Comment by IbqxCFhc on 09/16/09
asgw3.txt;4;15

Comment by MIKE on 03/27/09
i am now a house husband.if i work hard keep the house clean and dinners made,do you think these wonderful things can happen.oh to serve a mistress like that would be a dream come true.thank you for such a wonderful story.

Comment by Mistress Meredith on 03/10/09
Mistress Linda and maid candy have a nice, loving relationship, coupled with the proper elements of bondage and discipline. As my maid priscilla ann noted some time ago, I too, expect perfection just as Mistress Linda does, and I do not hesitate using bondage and corporal punishment to ensure I am served perfectly. That said, I too enjoy rewarding priscilla ann when he/she is a good maid in much the same manner as Mistress Linda rewarded candy. Bravo; a fine story, indeed.

Comment by Peggy Sue on 09/30/08
This isn't my style, I kept telling myself, as I read on and his bondage deepened. But I read on. I enjoyed the story. It turned me on. The mix of harshness and kindness was delicious.

Comment by louise on 03/21/08
Hi

I thought the story was great and the uniforms as well more please


Comment by Priscilla Ann on 11/12/07
Candy is a very fortunate maid. I am happy to say that my Mistress enjoys binding me nice and tight in my formal French maid uniform, and in my straight skirted work uniform, as well, especially when I have misbeaved or failed to perform my duties to her specifications. As with Candy's Mistress Linda, my Mistress expects perfection at all times, especially when it comes to hand washing and ironing her clothes. Yes, Candy is a very fortunate maid, indeed.

Comment by bili boy on 07/21/07
Wow what a woman!!! I wish you could get my wife into the same mind set as yours.

Comment by juliej on 05/28/07
a brilliant story of domination what a way to go how wonderfull this would be for me more please

Comment by K on 04/17/07
Great story!  Good pace & action.  Given Wash DC and her VP job, I would expect lots of cocktail parties to be given as well as business related meetings.  

Comment by slavetoby on 06/21/06
This is a remarkable story. You are so lucky to have such a smart wife who realized your true inner feelings. This has been a fantasy of mine for years. I am in a femdom living arrangement but unfortunately can not live it full time. Please keep this going as you live your life and times. I will truly be sitting on the edge of my chair waiting. Thank you

Comment by juliej on 05/29/06
its a great start to an interesting story its interesting how the parts played are so real life i prusenme bearing in mind that the feel of this story is the way its going to go with a lot more increased diversions untill it gets to the stage of permancey ie hormones etc or maybe his wife will tire of the game and make some huge changes to it ie maybe having a lover and or forcing candy into the spare room with nothing but a bedstead plus uniforms etc and maybe a locked dooor at night great story more please

Comment by Rachel Rae on 05/16/04
Really liked the way the story starts.  I'm not much on wives enslaving husbands because I have no experience in that area.  But I change my thinking from the wife to a Mistress and all goes well with the world.  Keep on writing and I'll be reading.

Luv    Rachel Rae

Comment by Karen Anne Summerfield on 05/15/04
As you should know, maids are one of my favorite genres. ‘Maid to Serve’ is a nice little maid story, which I enjoyed reading. I encourage Maid Candy to continue this tale with details of her days and weeks and her progress towards greater feminization.

Tara, fer a bits,
Erstes Dienstmädchen Karen Anne

Comment by jenny_In_PA on 05/14/04
i LOVE the story so far!  Please keep going with it!

i got my first maid uniforms from Dream Dresser in DC.  It is a great place to go!  However, once you get caught up on your account, you should check out the sales at VersatileFashions.com.  Also GlamourBoutique.com.  They also have very good people to deal with, and great items.

You are very lucky to be in your situation!  i'm jealous!  How did you ever wind up with such a wonderful wife?

Comment by juliej on 04/24/04
a very good story no explaining to neibours as to what is going on i would like to see more to this story it has a good begining what has he let himself in for more please

Comment by SassySue on 03/21/04
What an exciting and thrilling story.I agree with all the other comments and eagerly await the next installment.  

Keep up the good work!!
SS

Comment by Missi on 03/18/04
What a perfect start to the story. I can't wait to hear more!

Comment by Shania on 03/13/04
I am so jealous. I hope you realize how lucky you are to be owned by Mistress Linda. I am certainly looking forward to more chapters of your beautiful, exciting story.

Comment by Tiffany Anne Easton on 03/11/04
I agree with all the other comments. Great story and better yet - it happened to you (you lucky girl!). Please do continue. You've left us wanting more, dear.

Hugs!
Tiffany Anne

Comment by Stacey on 03/11/04
What a delightful story Candy, all the better for being true. How you must have enjoyed the experience, both living and writing it. Keep up the good work. Stacey xxx

Comment by sissycamila on 03/10/04
Hi Candy,

I have to agree with Matt. Reading this made me think of my early marriage where I was practically the wife and I was the little homemaker. Unfortunately this didn´t last until today, so I know what you are talking about. Hope it lasts for you for ever. Don´t let us wait too long for the second installment.

hugs and kisses, sissycamila

Comment by Matt on 03/10/04
Wow, how lucky Candy is. I wish this would happen to me. I love dressing in my womans clothes, heels and placing her makeup on my face. I love reading her girly magazines and playing with her vibrator. Candy you are a lucky little slave girl.
Great story and I look forward to the next part in this dreamy scenario.



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