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Maid to Server
by Jean M. Chambers

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Comment by Sylvia arreguin on 04/23/23
After being better I would set fire to the house and the two bosses and stab my self in the hart screw me.

Comment by Celeste on 06/26/09
The story developed perfectly, just as its victim did - develop.
Bravo to you.

Comment by Mistress Meredith on 12/22/08
I would feel sorry for maid Marie if she were not so deserving of her fate. The story made me chuckle, as well as making me feel all aglow. My maid, priscilla ann (who has not been sugically altered, but does have her former manhood tucked away and padlock in a very nasty little chastity device) comes to tears everytime I invite the women from the office over for a party or tea, or whatever other reason I can think of just to torment poor priscilla ann. You see, she too was demanding and abusive to the staff at my firm when she was GM, a position now held by her former secretary. And let me tell you, the staff has a wonderful time at my maid's expense whenever they are at my home. And they do love her frilly short skirted, petticoated uniforms. Yes, darling Marie got just what she deserved.

Comment by Priscilla Ann on 11/26/07
Ooh, poor Marie. Indeed, she got what was coming to her and got it in spades. Another wonderfully delicious example of poetic justice.

Comment by julie j on 07/18/05
the story was great agian the revenge aspect was very good and enjoyable i did not see the bondage part in this story but the elements were their well done and well written

Comment by Sissi Riki on 02/19/04
I loved this story. I wish it would happen to me.XOXOX, Sissi Riki

Comment by Amber Chalise on 08/28/03
Reason why rape occurs to the male victim is because of sexual punishment for their past crimes against women. I don't see how black mailing a women to have sex with you is any different then non violent rape.

On to the story though....

Good work jean as this is easily one of my favorite stories from you. I miss the cruelty of the previous stories but what you left is good for the imagination. Just a shame you don't make day in the life stories about the characters you have created.

Comment by Elizabeth Rees on 07/28/03
One of your better stories, I think. There wasn't such a sense of outright cruelty, and while being raped is never nice, it could have been much worse. Marie can still make something good of her life, and she'll have the money to do it with too.

Comment by rhonda on 07/19/03
I only wish this would be able to happen to me,But a great tail,for who ever it happens to,hay the money would be nice.and to be a full time french maid WOW.



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