i just adored your story. It made my mouth water and only truly wished there was such a place, time and situations. i would be in Canada on the next bus. Thanx for writing it. i have enjoyed all you stories, but especially this one. =)

The Maid Will
I adore this story; it has a special something that tingles me. For me it was painfully short and a dilemma too. For me, I needed more. One cannot harass an author about the end that I saw as a beginning and so it is.
I have continued the trials of Mandi for my own relaxation and tingles.
Mandi is taken into Ms Stevens home on her release from prison. That night when Mandi is naked, her mistress is shocked at the damage done to mandi, she is pierced several places, she is branded, her tongue is pierced in three places, her brow is pierced with another ring that hangs over her eye. She was kept in a brank, she was penetrated, and electrified.  Her body is ugly with its bruises, welts and scars
Mandi wants to die
Madame called Heidi who comes in the middle of the night. Together they save Mandi from herself.
Heidi takes Mandi to police headquarters where Heidi finds out that her superior, Inspector Wanda had arranged the raid at Heidi's home and Mandi's imprisonment.
Heidi kills Wanda in a duel.  
Mandi rebels at the constant punishments and she tells her Mistress that she hates her. Her mistress leaves a passport, air lineticket and money on mandi's bed.
When Mandi is offered this chance to leave, she realizes that she loves her Mistress and Heidi,
Mistress and Heidi come home that evening to find Mandi in a very Victorian Ladies maid uniform,  her very favorite uniform, shackled on the floor with a bamboo cane in her mouth.
Her Mistress allows Mandi to stay.
In a moment of tenderness mandi sitting on the floor at her mistress's settee tells her mistress that she is in love with her and Heidi. Mandi now knows that all the punishments and her uniforms are there to instill in mandi the life that she so desperately needs if she is to survive
She finally knows that her punishments are acts of love by Heidi and Her mistress.
I  am now at the point where Mandi begins the many many duties of a Victorian Maid. Because she is now a Victorian Maid, she must use the utensils of that period. Moderm utilities are not allowed. Mandi has to take out rugs and beat them, she must use a scrubbing boad to wash. She must change the bed linens and iron them, she must dust and prepare all meals. Herday begins at 4:30 am amd it finishes at 10 PM
To be continued.
Please note, that the original story is authored by others
My endeavor is for my personal "tingles"
I love it, but the original is authored by others and my little bit is just to keep my tingles. Try it yourself. It worked for me.
Pamela GB

This is something special, really special. It is one of those things yout can't put down until you have completed it. I adore this Maid Mandi.

please consider new chapters-----enforced maid training, strict punishments,curtsy training---locking uniforms----forced consent to any thing her owners wishes---mandi lent out to new owners---owners younger sister who is 15 and constantly test the obedience of maid mandi---

Amazing story, Wish I was in mandi's shoes...and dress...and pretty much everything else!

I found Part 3 to be very harsh, but everything up till then was wonderful.  And I could wish I were Mandi, just now in the correctional island.  Makes me want to move to Canada.

Karen,

Another wonderful tale, unfortuntely I think you eneded it to soon, another chapter dealing with the reactions of Heidi and Ms Stevens on her release would have been interesting to readers.

Keep up the good work.

M

 DEAR KAREN.

 I loved your story about the maid police,the steel bondage and maid uniform details were a total turn on,as i read the story i was wishing i was mandy,all those metal restraints and cells just blew my mind.

please please lets have some more.

i just love your stories darling.

best wishes  quinman349

I think this is one of Karen Anne's best. I love the idea of Mandi's good-humoured acceptence of strict and uncomfortable bondage ("Does the fact that my ass has been covered with contusions and some healing lacerations, as well as, one deep scar count, ma'am?" I smiled.), and the friendlyness of the people who apply it to her. It's just a personal prefernece, but I find it something of a turn off in bondage fiction when there is a dehuminisation of the sub - when there is no verbal or emotinal support from the person putting them in bondage, when they simply have to keep their eyes lowered and say master/mistress, and the owner comes accross as simply unpleasant and foul mouthed. Karen Anne makes slavery seem attractive because she generaly writes about decent and empathetic people who have nonetheless decided to strictly enforce figure training and bondage on someone that they like or love. I always look forward to your next story. When is your webste going to stop being "under constructon"?

Thank you very much for this wonderfull story. I wish I was maid Mandi.
Maid Annelies

Now, if it is punishment you want, complete with canings, Riki, be sure to read the conclusion in Part III. Trust that Maid Maidi will never wish to re-visit the facilites on Cockburn Island once she has served her time.

Ta-ra, fer a bits,
Karen Anne

Dear Karen, You know I love your stories and this one is no exception, I wish I was Mandy. I never critisize butt I would like to see less detail about the maid police and govt. and more details on Mandy getting punished and humiliated by her misstress. I loved the caningand having to eat and sleep on the floor. THANX, auf fiedersehen, Sissy Riki

I love it. But then again I love all your stories so why should this one be any different? Please don't keep us in suspense with the sequels.

I didn't think I'd like this story but it just goes to show how wrong you can be !!
As regards the previous comment:- is 'Pervy' taking the mickey ?  This is Fiction and thereby anything goes!! Geez talk about fuzzy! You'll be believing the world is round next.

The law may be different in Canada, but in the States if he signed
a contract thinking it was for two years when it was actually for
ten, there was probably no Meeting Of Minds & therefore no
contract. It depends of course, on how the courts view his failure
to read the contract carefully. A contract for such servitude would
be *very* closely examined by the court & might fail on that ground
alone. I would hope so; Mistress does not strike me as a fair
dealer.
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--Pervy