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The Makeover
by Laura Brooks

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Comment by april on 05/23/13
lovely story, highlights the difficulty of crossdressing to the
extent that it hurts the other partner. It should never get to that,
for the only solution is divorce you would have to make that choice
Sad though.

Comment by Geri on 03/23/10
Lovely story darling Laura.I wish....

Comment by Silvia      (from Brazil) on 06/28/09
Hi, you wrote a wonderful story. They deserve be a happy couple.
Please, keep writing.
Kisses.
Silvia.


Comment by libbie on 11/15/08
A really well written story.  This is one of the few that could occur in real life.  

Comment by CATHY ANGELA DAVIS on 07/11/08
WHAT HAPPENS NEXT DID SHE REALLY FORGIVE HIM?

Comment by lee  lee on 07/11/08
A sweet story that shirely touches any of us who have to confront our desire to crossdress with the person we love the most..this story could have taken many erotic turns but instead put th feminine needs of both spouses  on a even keel which allowed one to become proud to be a woman and the other to enjoy the feminine mystique   thanks for the story   loved each chapter    

Comment by Anon on 02/17/07
I love this story. most touching and so close to truth. The best in the fiction I have read so far

Comment by WannabeGinger on 01/15/07
I just love the pace of the story..... the way the truth is revealed,  the acceptance and, joyfully for him, the encouragement of a superb wife......  A warning to us all....... be grateful for small mercies and be happy with "less", no matter how much "more" your fantasy holds........   I nearly lost a marriage, and ended having to forego "participation" because I couldn't resist "more" than underwear and lipstick!  Be warned;  this story works out well, but, in truth, it's rare!

Comment by julie j on 08/21/04
a story that has a happy en ding it must be hell for the wife to find out about her husband in this way,it workedout in the end and his wife was indulgent withonly a few outbursts of tears good story

Comment by Susan Pauline Bauer on 03/14/03
Dear Laura,

As you know, I've always, "loved," your story, "The Bet." However this story is a very powerful story. Again, well written and well thought out. This is the type of story that makes you think. We transgenderd people always have to think from both sides. You brought that to life in your story. A mariage isn't a 50-50 pact. It's where each person gives a 100% of themselves to the other person. Your story also brought that to life. The tough love exhibited by your two characters makes for a very thought probing read. It is so sad that many cross-dressers wind up alone. Perhaps, that wouldn't happen if they all read this story!

Well Done!

Susan

Comment by julie on 02/19/03
I was amazed at the story it was very good and enjoyable it is very hard for your other partner to accept how you are hopefully there will be an other instalment

Comment by crossdressed and loving it on 02/06/02
Really great story. Couldn't quit till I finished it.



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