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Make The Best Of It
by Jennifer White

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Comment by this is me on 07/29/12
Yet another unrealistic reaction to TORTURE! It seems most of your stories gets transgender mixed up with male submission. One does not necessarily necessitate the other.

The man is either sick or he's different but he isn't the betrayer; she is! I still don't see many of the authors of these stories actually liking women they way they portray them as sadistic monsters.


Comment by juliej on 07/22/07
another great story well done

Comment by juliej on 03/06/06
a different theme to previous stories but agin it was great you neve repeat yourself and the way you write is excellent well done

Comment by Early June on 05/13/05
Just read "Make  the Best Of It" I enjoy all of your stories.  This one was different again.  I really disliked the wife all the way through to the end, then you switched in me.  Ok.  The jokes on me. How ever, I still like your stories. You have a talent to make so many variations to the theme.  Thnak you for sharing this.  And please keep writing your wondrous tales.



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