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The Making of Patricia
by Patricia Anne Anderson

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Comment by Patricia on 03/19/22
If you wish to feminise a boy why would you not have him wearing any lingerie. So many of these stories from USA there seem to have total loss of dressing as a girl. If the person wears a dress that is it. Some stories the boy is dressed in mens clothing but if the boy wears boys clothing that has been worn by a girl. So they believe he is feminised.  So many stories from USA seem to have lost the plot.

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Comment by Lily on 10/24/12
As with the other people giving you feedback I agree with most of it. The first part in this story was so sweet and felt magical. Innocent desire and the love of a family that was going to help Patricia. While reading through these stories I realized that it's as if you're combining multiple stories into one just to get the subject matter across. You hinted at learning more about the dads tendencies to cross dress further in the story but nothing ever came. The mother was very supportive and played a big part, but falls out of the story at the end like the father. Then there's the sisters, who love their brother and "new sister" so much but suddenly despite their young age have four 18+ year old boys over to play spin the bottle and not only allow the rape of Patricia but encourage it and make their brother lick their pussies as well... Were you rushed into finishing these stories or just grew bored and looked for an escape? It's really too bad because the beginning and middle were sooooo good.

Comment by Me on 07/04/12
Cannot blame her for hating those cock bitches! I hope they all Goddamn die a horrible death!

Comment by speedy on 03/05/12
I liked the premiss, but alittle ruff in spots. It seams like you know of what you write. Good or bad that's Patricia right. Good effort, please write more.

Comment by Silvia    (from Brazil) on 02/01/10
I agree totally with Bruce and seekingtounderstand.
Very bad story.
Silvia.

Comment by Bruce on 10/18/09
I get the feeling that a lot of this is autobiographical but still wierd, i have a lot of problems with sisters pimping out a younger sibling especially since no groundwork of hatred or abuse has been laid.  This reads more like a nightmare and the second half even more so.  So I can not reccomend this story...sorry

Comment by seekingtounderstand on 11/21/08
this story started ok but then it turned sick.  Try reading about Darla Ann and Crystal Ramsey and compare the difference especially Darla Ann by Crystal.  I don't like to start with a nice premise of a story and find it ending in the garbage bin.  True sisters don't do to their loved ones what this story reveals.  The author should be ashamed.

Comment by Teri on 09/08/07
Whether true or not this story like the best of literature has the ring of truth.

Comment by Sissy Priscilla Valentine on 08/19/01
Nice premise but for me the progression was way too fast, and I think a more loving physical involvement wiiith Daddy would have added a special flavor to Patricia's evolution. All the world hates a critic, right?  Tuly alot of us would count ourselves lucky to have been Patricia, and I look forward to more like this from you!

Kisses!

Sissy Prissy



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