Why do you think women or girls would do something like this with boys?
I'm a real girl, and I can tell you. We don't want turn boys into girls,never! We like boys!
Think about it!
Silvia.

Since part 22 was written in 2005 and now that the site appears to be down, I would guess we will not see how the gang has gotten along and what happens with Mandy, Amy, Danni, Lucy, Jess, etc. Sure wish there was a way for you Annabelle to finish this or at least let us readers know where to find "the rest of the story." It is well written and very intregging.

 This story began as a story that boys were to be girls in a fashion show.   I t was cute through most of it and even added a little of suspense with mandy being stabbed,  but somewhere during all of this you went to left field and never came back.  It actually was becoming boring and laborous to continue.  You should have continued this story first, subsequent stories on the other characters under different titles would have be more appropriate then dragging the reader through a lot of useless information.  I think you need to finish this story first, then go forward with the further lives of each of the characters.  At least we will know what really happened like did mandy and amy marry,  did danni find true happiness and what the hell happened to jess.

Nice role reversal story for the most part. I can appreciate the emphasis at the bigger girls pursuing a more domineering role, but I can also see what Jezzi is complaining about. It's getting a tad too much in the BSDM angle. However, I didn't think you were going to far, and it's quite understandable, but in order to fully grasp what the story is turning into you'd have to write more.

Also I would very much _like_ you to write more, but it looks like this story has been abandoned. Or maybe the authoress isn't able to do so any more? Which would be a really sad thing..

Oh well, my thanks for this nevertheless, it was highly enjoyable and a fun read.

Jo-Anne

I understand that in the UK certain things are more or less okay at a younger age, her in the US the age thing is kind of hard to get around in our thinking, but looking at it from a open minded view point I have really enjoyed reading your writings so far and I hope that you will continue to keep writing, but if i may suggest if you are going to publish anything in the US try to keep the sexuality between kids at a bear minimum or bring thier ages up to consenting age for here which would be 18.  well im back to finishing your story awsome work so far

Something seems to be missing at the end of Part 20, which ends with the two larger girls, Gemma and Lucy standing like doorkeepers, in mid-sentence.  Anyone know where the rest of it went?

Otherwise, it is a charming story, told with a delicate touch, believable and plenty happening in it.  It deserves to be finished though.

Hi Annabel. Could you please continue/finish this excellent story? Or is Part 22 the last one (even though it states ...To be continued...)
Look forward to the 'rounding out' of this series.

Hi Annabelle,

This is too good a story to die a lingering death.   Or,as Oliver twist would say, "Please Mam, May I have more".

Ole

Ive really enjoyed this story. It has been fun watching the different transformations of these boys and their relationships amongst them all. I am waiting patiently for the next update.

Thank you all for your comments.  

Sorry to lose you as a reader Jezzi - I have really appreciated your comments.  Look out for the last installment, though.  It's still in planning and it will probably take a few weeks to get it written.  I promise it will not be at all extreme for sex, but it will make you laugh!

I have to agree with Samantha - Crawley does not have great shops compared with some other centres (Brighton, Croydon, Tunbridge Wells etc.) but when you are fifteen and don't drive, it's the only mall that is accessible.

Sorry for the gap between the last installment and the next.  I will try to get the final few chapters written soon.

after 21:
  Sorry Annabel, the writing is still excellent, but I quit half way through.  The sex stuff in these later chapters, particularly the strap on and bondage stuff in this one, from teenagers is just too disturbing for 60 year old me. Even with consenting adults BDSM gives me the creeps.

Thanks for the latest installment and its great that a certain wound is healing nicely. But please, do you really think that Crawley has any decent shops? IMHO, it is the pits as far as shopping goes. That is taking fantasy a bit too far :-)

This continues to be a great set of stories.
Can not wait for the next story.

After part 15
   This was a very sweet chapter.  I hope Ali doesn't like Sam to the exclusion of Sally as Sam seems to be beginning to enjoy being Sally for herself as well as for Ali and the pageant, and I think Janet would be really sad to see Sally just disappear after the pageant.  I really like the way femininity is being presented to the three boys by these lovely kind girls, as a gift to them of something great and precious, and I am glad to see them accepting it in that light and coming to love it as a part but not all of themselves.  Continuing a GREAT job Annabel; you go writer gal !!

Hi again Annabel  :)

Just letting you know that I am still reading and enjoying your story.
Thank you
Hugs, Fran

Great story! Love it! Can't wait to read more. You do need a proof reader. I found several typo's and a few sentences that did not make any sence at all.

Hi again Annabel  :)

Just letting you know that I am still reading and enjoying your story.
Thank you
Hugs, Fran

after part 12

<<  "To be fair, they are making themselves look silly by trying to dress as girls. It would be a bit much to expect them to go and make themselves look even more silly. >>

Are they, really?  This comment by Alison really bothered me.  I read a comment on another story yesterday to the effect that no girl would ever take a crossdresser seriously.  From what you've written, I don't get the impression that Mandy and Dani, at least think they are acting silly; my impression is that they are trying, rather successfully, to project an image of real teen femininity, of being young ladies, the idea being NOT to look silly.  And they are enjoying themselves.  Is this what the girls really think, that the boys just look silly and they are humoring them for the contrest?  I think the three would be insulted if they heard that.  I think I have lost respect for Alison after that comment; it seems out of character for how you have written her - or is it just that the girls really don't understand what they have unleashed in the two, possibly three, new TGs.  And from what's been written, it seems to me that at least Mandy and Dani have already become transgendered, that is that their feminine personas are now integral to themselves and not just put on because the girls want them to, although they, themselves may not realize that yet.  If the girls told them to quit after the pageant, they would probably try. but I bet they'd be miserable eventually.  Poor M, D, & S if that is what the girls really think, that they are just silly .

On another note, Annabel, thank you for avoiding the "His penis is cut off; we have to make him a girl!" cliche.

Boy.  It sure is getting intense!  

Have to agree with Jezzi's comments about Jess.  She was completely out of control and no one did anything about it.  Now, of course, we see the results of not doing anything.

Sally is rapidly becoming my sympathic favorite.  I'm sorta rooting for her to win.  Don't know if I care much for Sam's mom enthusiasm though.  Guess it's a case of 'tough love.'

I look forward to the next one Annabel!

Son of a bitch, that jess is a real wack job, sadistic, horrible young girl. glad that the other two didn’t blindly follow her lead.
Love the story.

After part 9

CONGRATS!!!  What a wonderful, sweet, yet sexy chapter.  You have done a great job of creating two young men by whom femininity is being treated as a wonderful gift; it has made them feminine, as in caring, considerate, and gentle lovers to their girlfriends, but not effeminate, as in swishy carricatures.  While certainly not needing her program, Tigger's Aunt Jane would be proud of how Andy/Amy and Dan/Danni have turned out.  I think you have made the girls wonderful teachers, and that both males are on their way to being life-long transgendered, proud in both of their personas.  Yours is the way femininity should be both presented and accepted.  Rock on, Annabel!

After part 7

1)  Jess is psychotic, and no one seems to be taking her seriously enough.  There are steps that could be taken.  Find out if pepper spray is legal; if not, What about Mandy and Danni being wired so there'd be verbal proof of intimidation? Then the parents could notify the police and get a restraining order (or whatever is similar in the UK).  If they want to handle things themselves, lure Jess and her two cronies into a trap, where about 9 girls are hiding and come out when they start to assault Danni or Mandy - one videotapes the assault ... but not when the nine beat the crap out of Jess and Co., of course  :-)

2)  I was going to protest the treatment of Sam, but I think from this chapter that he doth protest too much.  He did stay with his friends voluntarily, which if he was really pissed he wouldn't have done.  I think he really just wants to fit in, and I think the girls are on the right track with the pampering, which he DID agree to. I think if they really want him to enjoy being a girl, though, they should stick to the plan he knows about; whatever "surprises" their planning may be counterproductive if he feels they've betrayed him.

3)  I really would like to see Richard put his foot down; Not that he should stop being Dierdra, but Jane is getting too much like a domme, and Karen and now the other girls are picking up on it.

Hi Annabel,
Read up to part 7, enjoying every bit of it.
Thanks for a fun and entertaining story

after part 6

What is different about Jane, Karen, and Mandy's treatment of Dierdre, making her get her ears pierced when she doesn't want to, from Jess's treatment of Danni?  Seems only a matter of degree.  They should have had more sympathy for his work situation, and, anyway, they most likely could have sweet talked him into it without being nasty.

Why don't the girls carry mace or pepper spray?

Good story but part 4 came out unreadable

Hi again Annabel  :)

Just letting you know that I am still reading and enjoying your story.
Thank you
Hugs, Fran

After part 3

Well, I sure got the "bit of conflict" I asked for!  Thanks, Annabel.

It would take a lot of guts, but Dan should proudly wear the dress to school with a sign board on his front and back advertising the pageant.  Mandy could dress young and do it too, maybe handing out flyers, and the nice girls could spread the word about how brave they are to be doing this for their church.  If they carry it off as a lark and for charity, they could make themselves heroes instead of humiliated sissies, and it would be Jess that gets burned for trying blackmail.

Thanks to you all for you messages of encouragement and good ideas.
I am an inexperienced writer - this sotry and Annabel's Story are my first attempts at creative writing since I left school so many years ago.  It is most heartening to know that my efforts are well received.
Best wishes, Annabel

After part 2

I REALLY like the involvement of the laid back dad; that is definitely the road less traveled in TG fiction.  Good for you, Annabel !!  Maybe Dierdre could be the Mistress of ceremonies at the pageant.  I do think the story could use a bit of conflict.  Maybe a boy who really doesn't want to do it and an evil mom and sister are forcing him; Mandy finds a way to help the reluctant girl.

Hi Annabel :)
Keep your story coming.
Hugs, Fran

Wonderful start!  You have me anticipating the next chapter, which makes it the web equivalent of a "page turner"!

Julie

Fun start.  Very imaginative -- reminds me of a fiction story I actually did read for school, "The All-Girls Football Team (which was more about the all-boys-dressed-as-girls Cheerleaders) by Luis Nordern -- very entertaining with about the same note of whimsy you've captured.  

Anyway, I digress.  Your story has the makings of a classic.  I can't wait to read the next installment to see how things develop.  I do hope you've taken your time.  Truly great stories are well worth waiting for.

Love & Huggs,
Sheryl S.

Hi Annabel,
A well written story, good humour and believable. Especially liked the naive father. Look forward to Part 2.

Love Karen.

Lovely story so far. Hope you will continue it. If possiable could you add ashort boy (like myself) who is forced into the contest?


Cissy

Very nice story. Iwish I cold be Annabel. I have some french maid outfits and love being told what to do by my misstresses! I hope you write some follow u p stories and feel free to put me in them, I'll even come over and clean your house if you want me to!! XOXOXOXO, Sissy Ricki

I rather enjoyed this story and look forward to future episodes.

Thanks for your efforts Annabel.

fregen