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Comment by Penny on 01/18/22
Abi, you need an editor, the number of times you used defiantly instead of definitely was embarrassing. Also would someone go to an empty house with someone they didn't know that well, let alone have sex with them? Comment by see pron on 10/11/18 74yWvM There is a bundle to know about this. You made good points also. Comment by "Missy," Susan Pauline on 09/30/15 Dear Abi, Comment by cheap backlinks on 07/18/14 inHtTn I truly appreciate this article.Really looking forward to read more. Awesome. Comment by ashley on 11/05/10 a great wonderful story. Comment by Silvia. on 05/25/10 Hi Abi. Comment by Bruce. on 07/11/09 Absolutely loved your stories,keep up the good work Comment by Captain 29 (Rob) on 06/19/09 Excellent again. Much better than JamieII but still in need of proofreading and editing ... and still that damned 'defiantly' has crept in! All in all, kudos. Keep up the good work! Comment by Melody on 05/07/09 Great story! a fantasy i have always had! Comment by carla michelle on 06/08/08 i really loved this story. Comment by jeannette on 12/01/07 Cute story!... Short, but cute! Comment by jeannette on 11/30/07 Cute story.... short, but cute! Comment by Daniel on 05/24/07 Not bad, but too quick to allow sex on the first day as a girl Comment by Leslie on 04/18/03 I thought it was a great story. It was a bit unlikely but the real world is so boring anyway! :) Comment by Barbara Lynn on 11/14/02 Abi, this was great story. However, I wish that you would continue it and have Abi go home like that forgetting she is dressed as a waitress. That would be soooo cool. Comment by Marjorie on 06/06/02 Such a sweet story. I can't help but wish I'd had a job like that when I was 15. Comment by katie on 12/28/01 what a lovely story i must say i enjoyed it so much keep up the good work Comment by Diane Sutton on 07/29/01 Nice story I liked it and thought it quite good for a short story. I always like to read something written by someone in the UK as they always have a different way with the use of the english language compared to us in the U.S. It's a nice change to read these stories and this one was good. Comment by Emmie Dee on 12/05/00 I enjoyed your story, too, Abi. And what a strange coincidence--I read it just as I was finishing a section of my "Something Borrowed, Something BLue" where my hero/ine gets her turn as a waitress. Whether it's dollars or pounds, it's the tips that matter anyway. Thanks, and keep on writing. Comment by Abi Over on 12/05/00 Just to reply to your message Paul I used pounds because I'm British and the story is set in the UK, not America. Thanx for the support though Comment by paul jutras on 12/05/00 Male Waitress is good. Though I don't know if you mis-type the dollars to be paid per hour or if it was mistype on purpose to be yen or something. THe tale itself was good and worth reading. |
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