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Mandy
by: Julie & Amanda

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Comment by suba suba on 11/07/19
nDbwQE There may be noticeably a bundle to find out about this. I assume you made certain nice points in features also.

Comment by crorkz on 08/03/14
HfyNnH Thank you ever so for you article.Thanks Again. Want more.

Comment by No on 03/10/13
If you please, part 2 would an inspiration for many to read, I for one. Thank you

Comment by walter on 12/29/12
racconto noioso

Comment by Stephen on 07/27/11
when is part 2

Comment by Silvia. on 06/15/10
A very, very, bad story!

Comment by Regina on 04/23/09
Great story I loved it please write part 2

Comment by bob on 01/17/09
nice story.

Comment by AJ on 04/09/08
Julie & Amanda

I really liked the story. But is there going to be a part 2? I have been waiting a good while for it. But i really liked part one anyway.


Comment by hydiegrey on 12/16/07
   The story went fast and direct. enjoyed. Hydie

Comment by Cindy on 05/20/06
Loved the story so far, very descriptive

Comment by Pauline on 04/15/06
Julie and Amanda

you left the wonderful story hanging five years ago.  Amanda must have grown some since then.  I'd like to know all about her

Comment by Kahla F on 10/29/05
This story really is quite captivating, and leaves me wanting more. I hope the next part is written soon....

Comment by julie j on 08/10/04
a good combination of words and the story was preety god i am looking forewards to the next part in due course you are a very good writer julie and i enjoy all of your stories well done

Comment by Susan Pauline Bauer on 05/04/04
Dear Julie and Amanda,

As usual this is a well-written story and full of the detail or the, "word-pictures," that make it great. The young lad who found more family acceptance as a young lady did have some dark moments and, perhaps, should have been included with the shared information.

HOWEVER ... when is part two coming? Or, is there a Part Two? This is 2004!

Is it up to the reader's imaginaton?

My wife liked your book, "Lacey." I think the last two chapters qualified it for her.

Your storysite fan,

Susan

Comment by julie on 01/28/04
this story is well writen a bit heavy for daniel who had the hardest jodbto do having to dress as a girl not understanding why it seem the school staff are quite vicious by the way they treated the girls i reckon the purple pill are hormones the next installment hopefully will be as good as the first well done

Comment by Claudette St. Onge on 11/26/03
Julie & Amanda,

  I thought the story (so far) was interesting and well written, but I have to agree with other girls that it does seem to have a "dark" tone to it when Amanda is sent to a distant girls school.  One suspects that her mother wanted her out of the way so her own love-life could be indulged in without the presence of anyone else around to interrupt it.  For a woman that wants her son to be her daughter, she seems to almost "put it on hold" while she indulges her sexual appetite.

                                       Claudette

Comment by julie on 03/12/03
a very good start to the story I can see how the mother wanted a girl
it was a wicked trick to play but I understand why thew next part should be more intresting as to how he gets a long and what happens when someone catches him out which must happen at some stage in the story well done and i look foreward to the next part

Comment by Night Wolf on 03/11/03
Although very long a great start I am dissappointed that there is not yet a second part to read!  I hope you and Julie will continue it soon!

Comment by Barbara Lynn on 11/17/02
This is a very interesting but cold, icy cold, story, except for the ending. I shivered all through this. I know there are SOME women who detest men. And I know of a few case histories where mothers have forced their sons to dress and act as girls. But this story . . . I just don't know. There is something very dark in between the lines.

Barb

Comment by Diane Sutton on 08/20/01
A well written story with a few twists and turns that lets the reader enjoy the years that Amanda turns into a girl. I found lots of loving and a few parts that were not as you would expect in a story. But, the truth is that such things do happen in real life and you don't always have the happiest of times growing up.

Diane

Comment by Janine on 06/11/01
I just loved this story, and am eagerly awaiting to read more of it. :)

Comment by Susan on 06/10/01
I love your new story and am anxiously awaiting the next chapter.Thanks for your efforts, they are truly appreciated. Bye

Comment by Judi on 06/08/01
Dear Julie and Amanda,

I love your story......Please keep up the good work.  Some stories are read once and discarded but I have always read Julie's stories over and over again.  Thank you for your efforts.  Please do continue to write.

Love,
Judi

Comment by spoiled brat on 06/07/01
great story

Comment by Nora-Adrienne on 06/06/01
Ladies, although parts of this story are more then a little dark. I like the way you are building it up.. I hope that you post the next chapters quickly.. Thank you



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