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Man Gets Maid Or Maid Gets Man?
by Scott Andrews

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Comment by i love pron on 12/20/18
FlMyyw Thank you ever so for you article post.Much thanks again.

Comment by jjconn on 07/03/17
as soon as marisol suggested a chasity device you should have said YOUR FIRED you have no reason to trust her

Comment by ashley on 08/13/13
nice one - - but like only 7/10

Comment by juliej on 07/25/06
its an intersting hard story very fast with the action and only a little bit of improvisation could be a lot better buta goodstart

Comment by Michelle on 08/21/05
Wonderful! By all means, please write more, possibly a continuation?

Comment by SassySue on 08/20/05
Great, especially for a first time author.  It is a very hot, erotic tale.  My only suggestion would be to focus more on describing your protagonist's feelings so we could better understand why he lets Marisol and Carlos femminize and enslave him.

Keep up the good work.  I look forward to reading more stories from Scott Andrews.


Comment by Jaycee on 08/15/05
A great story! Short, to the point, and very erotic. No real suggestions for improvement, but may I make a request for more?

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