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Manisha.....The woman on the train
by Josephine Gonsalves

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Comment by Diya on 09/13/12
Great concept and very well written story. I love the theme, especially crossdressing in a saree and sitting on a lady's ;ap.

Diya.


Comment by swanubhuti jain on 07/25/11
hey manisha,you are gr8,Dear good story.i want to wear sare in public .pls send me good stories.i am also cd.i am dressed at night my wife dresses & and many times i am going early morning in round up in street.

Comment by Subina on 08/07/10
Dear ,good story.i want to wear sare in public .pls send me good stories

Comment by samyuktha_cd on 10/03/07
Hi Josei,

Tugeli kani layk asa.  par phude tuve prakasan kelele manishale pratham bhagthu sukunu chukunu atha pratham ani dusere bhagu ekachi asa.  tya chuki sudh kari.  Ani haje baki bhag lagene prasaran karuk magtha.

wish u alll success


Comment by jaya menon on 09/17/07
wonderful story dear the part 3 and 4 are really getting very exciting. i am eagerly waiting for the next darling josie.
with love jaya

Comment by raju sharma on 04/26/07
GREAT STORY. GOOD FANTACY. I WISH TO ENJOY THE SAME WITH A WOMAN OFCOURSE. PLZ. MAIL ME. I M IN MUMBAI NOW. LATER ON I WILL GO ABROAD

Comment by Samyuktha_cd on 02/12/07
Ur stories r very good  I like them.  But what happened to Manisha?  Pls complete the stories which r in half way.

Thank u


Comment by Carla on 09/09/06
Nice story. I work in Bombay, so it has a particular resonance for me. I love saris and salwar kameez, and the Indian girls just look so beautiful!
But it looks like there is a lot of text missing from Part 2.

Comment by Leah on 09/07/06
The link to part 2 has been rectified and it is worth following. (And I'm certainly hoping that the tale continues. The scene on the train is wonderful from the tg point of view -- not so much in the eyes of a dead-tired working girl going home to fix supper, etc.)

You'll likely note that Josephine has been very active lately and possibly doesn't want to repeat too many of the basic themes. For an enjoyable read, go to her earlier four-part "Joanie Come Lately."

That story led me to track down pictures and information on sarees (saris) and other items of womanly attire in India and South Asia. You'll see that Joanie's story gives you some important insight.


Comment by Amanda on 09/03/06
Part 1 & 2 are the same, disappointing. Otherwise a very interesting story.

Comment by Super Trouper on 09/03/06
Part 2 is identical to Part 1. The URL for Part 2 points to part 1.

The story is nice but please add more detail There is hardly anything about our heroine's attempts with makeup. And where/how did he but his Wigs. We need to know this sirt of thing you know.




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