Hi
Gennie
only just found your story today 27/2/10
Have loved it so far as it is my fantasy as well but unfortunatly not something that would ever happen to me.
You seem to be writing from the heart and I hope you keep up the good work.
unlike a lot of storys it is not all sex and tittilation but gives a deeper feeling and I cant wait to read the next part

i wonder how many of us have to deal with supressed feelings such in your story. Written like it could really be that way except for the forced embaressement from his younger sister.That was as if she was just trying to be mean--getting back at her brother in a mean spirted way. Very beleivable and nicely written. Thank you.

Excellent from beginning to end. I guess "gennie" learned her lesson, but it was delicious fun enjoying her horror and humiliation along the way.

a heavy story well worth the read what a way to go amazing set up and the verbal fighting good but with no joy

the first two parts are very interesting a trap set and sprung revenge by his sisters and wife will com,ent again after reading the rest of the story

GOOD OLE RED NECK FATHERS.    SURE CAN MAKE LIFE ROTTEN.  THIS IS A GOOD STORY AND ITPOINTS UP MANY OF OUR   PROBLEMS

SIBC??  Yes most definatly continue i have enjoyed it very much so far

Really enjoying the story, only wish it was coming faster.  But coming from someone with zero creativity and commenting about a gifted writer, i will wait with patience.....but hurry!

This is turning out to be more interesting than the summary makes it to be. It does sound like what a lot of TVs do go through -- some on a daily basis. I do hope you have a purge sequence somewhere.
 Please keep this like it is!

Hi gennie,
 I don't think the story is moving too slowly!!  It is moving along, showing the inner turmoil of the main character!  This is a good thing!
 Keep writing at this pace, it is showing how the 'new' gennie' devlopes.  I like the story very much.  Not something I would have thought of, so it interests me!
 Keep writing!!
Lisaelizabeth

Great fun story but chastity belts are not fort knox and while avisit to a hospital would be embarassing could be done photos are always good leverage but does this guy work months of work think this would  be more fun if time scale was about a week If the story suggests he has no wish to become tv hed rebel quickly I would I like the two sides that being tv or cd gives you the best of both worlds not the worst of one  ......linzi Ive a story coming soon and its truexx

I noticed at the end of todays episode of the story that you are looking for comments on the story line. I have quickly scanned through the pieces of your story and saved them to my computer, but have not read through them. I do this frequently for serial stories. I like to read the entire composition rather than piece-by-piece. Also, I rarely read short stories, prefering longer stories with more character development and plot. The downside to this approach is that I am not able to give my 2-cents to the author until after they have finished the story. I like what I have scanned of your story, and definitely intend to enjoy it when it is finished. Since you asked, my advice is to trust yourself as to the best story pace. Your story appears to be better suited to lingering reading pleasure than short-term instant gratification.

Thank you for your efforts.

AnonymousOne

Let's see now. He's wearing a chastity device, his wife(?) needs some sexual relief. So, she looks around at all those BIG studs out there with no devices.
   So, when does he get in in the end, so to speak.
   Oh well, marriage is an institution, and so is the White House.

Debra,

What a good read and so into the emotions of a sissy want to be.  I love the acceptance of everybody to his (her) proper station in life.

Hugs,

jeannie