GAWD!!! this was sick he went through all of that just to please them and they fuck him over ... again I'd like to see a sequel where he breaks free of the hypnosis and belts the girls they set him up to fail right from the beginning

I've been reading your works off and on. I decided to not be guilty of not commenting. I enjoy what you write. Your writing works my imagination and to me that is indeed the kind of writing I like.
I've as I said enjoyed your writing and decided to let you know although I write at Big Closet Top Shelf I am a fan of yours.
Please continue to write as you have been.
Jill Micayla

Umm... it doesn't make sense to me why these people are turning them into girls if in the past the guy was gay. Gay guys don't identify as women, they like being men that like other men, so WHY are they turning them into women? That just makes no sense if you ask me.

I can't believe this. I know it's 'just' fantasy but Oh. My. God.

A real man (tm) isn't shy of doing something 'girly' or going along with such a far fetched rediculous test to prove his undying devotion and love for his future wife. Not while he has been prepped and warned of the utter significance of said test.
It seems the females of this family are in search of the proverbial boar with the views and reactions of a hick rather than someone with empathy elegance and resolve.

Sorry I didn't like it.

Jo-Anne

if she really wanted him she could have dropped him a hint....he should have went with her and her dad ... and really at the end more fun would have been had if he had to explain why he did it p.s. hypnosis is bollocks

Great story as always. I knew there was going to be a interesting ending and it didn't disappoint. Hope there will be a continuation.... I see many fun possibilities.

Kinda a sad ending. He was just trying to do what he felt was the right way. But I guess that for him, that was the right way. I hope Carla does not have any relaps in the future.

This had the best plot twist I've ever read in a peice of erotic fiction. I love it when my brain gets turned on as well as the rest of my body. ^^