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March Of The Southern Belles
by Heidi-Jo McGillicuddy

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Comment by faye on 03/30/09
i enjoyed it very much

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Comment by WannabeGinger on 12/29/08
Please, please,  when you write some more..... Could you complete the picture of the Belle with much much more about her hair and beauty preparations?? For me, the picture isn't complete ....yet!
LOL WbG xxx

Comment by DeeDee on 08/11/08

Absolutely Phenominal!

Truely one of the best and refreshing stories I've read in a long time! Thank You for Posting! It's rare that I get the opportunity to respond to a New Post, most of the stories I've wanted to respond to are years and decades old and it's just hightly improbible that my feedback would serve any purpose. This one is a keeper! Please keep up the very good work, I'll be looking forward to reading more ASAP! Again, Thank You.  DeeDee

PS
this line really jumped out at me "being subjected to loud, filthy rap music blasting out of the car next to me." Without a doubt you've got carpenter potential to really Hit The Nail On The Head!! Ditto!! The "Thumping" just drives me crazy!  Take Care!


Comment by Donna on 07/02/08
Fantastic!!!!!  "March of the Southern Belles" is one of the best dress-up stories I have ever read!!  I can hardly wait for the next chapter!!  Thanks!  Donna

Comment by cathy angela davis on 06/27/08
I LIKED THE STORY WHAT HAPPENS NEXT I HOPE THEY GET MARRIED. GOOD FICTION. I JUST NEVER FOUND A LADY, THE CHARACTER OF LISA SOUNDS LIKE A LADY. I WISH I COULD FIND MINE. THEY DO NOT SEEM TO EXIST ANY MORE. AND WHY WOULD A GIRL WANT TO BE LIKE A MAN WHEN THEY ARE THE SUPERIOR SEX.IT
WAS MORE FUN FOR HIM TO BE ONE OF THE GIRLS I WISH I COULD DO THAT.

Comment by jeannette on 06/22/08
I would LOVE 2 B in a "Southern Belles"  parade! Contact me if U need an extra "gurl". Love, sissy jeannette.

Comment by (AJ) Eric on 06/21/08
Delightful.  Thanks for posting it.

Comment by Sweetapple on 06/21/08
A fine story, well-written, tasteful, restrained but sensual. It is good to see a story so unstereotyped.

Comment by rone welles on 06/14/08
  Well done and a fun story   ....  hope you keep it clean and let him have fun the whole day ....  taking them to a reinactment of civil war where he meets a general to take in a dance ... you have fun with this .. we will just enjoy what your mind puts out ...
Thank you for your talent and sharing with us weirdos ...

xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox   Rone


Comment by Annalise Barker on 06/14/08
Heidi-Jo,
This is a truly lovely story and I can't wait for the next installment; I hope it comes very soon.
You have succeeded in capturing the purely feminine moments that Lisa's boyfriend was 'forced' to endure with such grace. I am struggling to decide which is my own high-point in the story though - the tying of the lavender bow under her bonnet, or pulling on the long lavender gloves... beautiful.
Keep writing girlfriend!
love and hugs,
Annalise

Comment by Minty on 06/05/08
This is really, really good. I hope there's more to come. Seriously, this is the best tg story I've read in ages. x

Comment by Clare on 06/05/08
Well written.  Creating a new, realistic perspective on a TG story is not easy, but you've done it very, very well. Congratulations.

Comment by Maid Joy on 06/04/08
AAARRGGHHHH!!!  Pleasepleasepleaseplease finish this soon!  I love what I have read so far, but I'm begging you to finish it out so I can read the rest.



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