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Mares Tales
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Comment by Axneeno on 07/09/12
I bow down humbly in the prensece of such greatness. Comment by Roy Del Frink on 12/23/01 Liked it Beverly, even though it was more than kinky and perverted in parts and much of it was, well, beyond reason. This is one of the few tales out there that combines sensitivity and freakishness in the same story and makes it work. Didn't care much for the last few chapters, though, particularly the bits about the comet and the lesbian cult, and the ending was, IMO, a total cop-out. This story badly needs an epilogue, or a sequel, detailing what the world will be like after the upcoming "changes" of puberty kick in. I still have a few questions about this tale, though, so please e-mail me privately so we can discuss them. Comment by Tom on 10/05/01 Appreciate the authors hard work but it could have been put to a better use than this story. Comment by josie on 06/05/01 Great premise and very well written. A bit short on the detail and character/plot development for an A+, my dear.... but with a little more work you might well have a real winner here. I could easily see you working this one into a series. Comment by zerker on 05/31/01 This was great! I hope there will be more. Solid writing,good,kinky ideas,well decribed.MORE,MORE,MORE! Comment by Paula Jutras on 05/30/01 An enjoyable story with a good ending. |
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