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Marilyn's Sexual Paradise
by Brett Lynn

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Comment by best pron on 12/20/18
AHr9nd on Aol for something else, Regardless I am here now and would just like

Comment by Henrique on 10/23/12
/     Miss Bouncy Bear is too funny in these videos with her two fretaiovs. Thanks for taking time for these small but significant moments! They mean so much.

Comment by donna on 08/24/10
Intense!

Comment by Gingerfred Man on 11/20/01
Beautiful sendoff to Heaven for the world's biggest-dicked, hetero she-male!  Hot sex and cool dialogue.  Lots of flirting, which I enjoy very much, and I never tire of the surprise when the ladies realize that Marilyn is packing pork.  If Michael Jordan made two comebacks, I expect one from Marilyn in a year or so.



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