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Marvelous Maid
by April

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Comment by jeremy abrams on 05/16/17
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Comment by crorkz matz on 08/04/14
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Comment by matzcrorkz on 08/03/14
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Comment by Silvia. on 10/18/10
BAD!

Comment by Mistress Meredith on 11/10/08
You are a very good little maid, April. Of course, if you were my maid I would have you in nylon stocking with garters rather than pantyhose. But that is just a matter of taste. I do hope you enjoyed standing on that porch, bound and blindfolded with nice wind gusts rustling your petticoats and skirts just to remind you of your vulnerability.

Comment by Priscilla Ann on 02/18/08
Oh, please finish this wonderful story. Fortyunately, my Mistress has neber exposed me in public -- that is to say out of the house. Standing, bound and blindfolded, on Jen's front porch must have been mortifying. More please

Comment by M on 01/01/08
A shame that you have not finishd this good story

Comment by juliej on 04/28/07
a re read more carfully it was a brilliant story but need to be conluded witha lot more bondge etc its brilliant i wonder what else is planned for this man that he did not expect more please asap

Comment by julie j on 03/28/05
the first two parts are very good i was impresses with the writing and how once the work was finished he got relies and fell asllep i bet he did not expect the bondage part of it but i hope that the next part is not to long this could turn out to bee one of the best story around we will seee in the next part but weell done for a great story start

Comment by Anne on 01/05/04
I love to act as amaid for my special friends.  The only thing I like that is different from this heroine is I love to wear sheer black nylons rather than fishnets.

Comment by Penelope Blush on 01/05/04
Love the storyline! I wish I would get the chance to serve as a maid more often. I dress very often but normally at home with my wife and occassionally with an old schoolfriend who is still single and lives alone. Would you include more reference to petticoats and frilly panties under short skirts and dresses in your stories? Please?
Love Penelope xx

Comment by Justine on 01/03/04
I'll have to join everyone else in saying what a great beginning it is!  There are so many ways that this can go.  Whenever I'm dressed as a maid for my wife, it's the (risk of) exposure that gets me the most.  I can appreciate waiting by the door, waiting for the coast to be clear!

Comment by Melissa M on 01/03/04
Very great start.  Cant wait to read more. Hopefully some forced sex with a man. Bj would be great. Surprise the new 'maid'

Comment by SassySue on 01/03/04
Have to agree with the other commentators: this story is off to a great start and I hope that it stays true to its orignal charcterizations.

I really look forward to reading more  Keep up the good work.

SS

Comment by Sheryl S. on 01/02/04
Very nice start -- can't wait to see more.  

I agree totally with Pervy and Mysti -- this is much more in-keeping with our already strange-enough tentative touches with reality.  It's hard to me imagine a wife or girlfriend WANTING to make her husband into a woman -- except in the rarest of conditions and circumstances (anything, of course, is possible with human behavior, but I think a TG'd guy's chances of winning the lotto are better than finding someone who'd force maiddom or feminization unless the husband had already confessed his dysphoric nature -- and even then, that would be, in most cases, the approach of last resort.  

But, of course, this site is, thank goodness, about enjoyable fantasy fiction -- NOT REALITY -- so anything goes.  Still, given that gap already, to me it is only the most successful and well-written of these stories that manage to remain true to their own characters without superimposing the author's mindset over the credibility of the other characters.  

Anyway, this is a long way of saying that I really enjoyed the beginning, hope to see more, and hope that it stays true to the original characterizations.  

Hugs & kisses,
Sheryl S.

Comment by jeannie on 12/31/03
This is a nice story.  Most of us maids would love the acceptance that is given here.

I do work as a sissy maid for my wife.  She likes all the work I do, but isn't really interested in me as a maid.  Sigh.

jeannie

Comment by Mysti on 12/31/03
Two firsts: a good first effort on Story Site and a good first part to the story.  I agree with Pervy- voluntary maid stories are a rarity, but I much prefer them  to the forced fem kind. Please continue the story.

Comment by Pervette on 12/31/03
Maid stories are always nice. Voluntary maid stories are even
nicer. There aren't many around, & every new entry is welcome. This
one is off to a good start. She seems amused but not malicious, a
very good sign. I'll be interested to see how the story develops.
.
--Pervy



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