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Mary Jane
by Misty Galant

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Comment by Silvia. on 12/26/09
I didn't like.
Silvia.
Comment by Jackie on 04/25/08
Misty you are a doll!  I am in love with your character.  Each of them is so intelligent and sophisticated.  You are able to present a wonderfully sensual scene and not slip down into a trashy mire.  There is such a fine line between beautiful and tawdry and you stay on the beautiful side all along.

You have a way of making us wish we could be a character in your story, any character, they are equally sexy.

I read your rpevious two part story about the PET sorority and their little Debbie.  That story was equally wonderful.  I just get totally taken in by the visual of the loving talks between your characters in which one is holding the other in her lap and taling so sweetly to them.  I may just be a chump for sentimental stuff, but that is so romantic.

Keep up the good work my dear and pleas do not stop writing.  I am your undying fan!!!

Kisses
Jackie

Comment by dainti on 04/19/08
a six-year-old girly-girl shouldn't be forced to show her panties if she doesn't want to.  and she shouldn't be forced to wear baby dydees at her age just because she has an accidental little betsy wetsy in her frillies. that's cruel.
Comment by whr on 04/15/08
not bad wot did he do get turnd in to a six year old and wot happind after did he get back out of diapers
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